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I see the potential.
Were-unicorn? Huh.
Honestly if this was a full story I'd like that third option the most and have Celestia make Luna caring for Sunset as her punishment. But that's just me.
I like to see the third, but the other two interest me.
I am interested in Science of Sisterhood
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Thanks Andres! I appreciate the thought. I really like the idea too! the major hurdle I've realized on stories happening this early is that we don't have a lot to go on in writing Sunset, which makes writing her a challenge.
She's bad enough that she ran through the mirror, but she must have been humbled for a while early on until she got a handle on being human. 2-3 years before the start of EQG, and we can assume she started off not so bad, and got worse based on the progression in the Princess pictures shown on the wall.
So, I want to write her the way I imagine her, but that means that she may end up being too out of character... There's also the fear of ending up recreating stories that had similar concepts, and inspired this story, such as Second Chance to find home.
I definitely plan on writing more chapters though!
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the similarity you can have with Second Chance to find the home would be more or less at the beginning when the Sparkle family takes care of it, but from there it can take a totally different turn, because it is known that Sunset was alone in the human world since her escape from Equestria, which allowed her to do what she wanted without limit, but with the accident and that the State knows that she exists, she can have the opportunity to start a new life
Pony Sunset being raised by Human Sunset?
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Someone take this idea and run with it!
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I know right?!
That actually is kinda cool. I would love to read a story with this regardless of wether it’s romance focused or not.
Third does seem best. Though first is a close second.
Huh, I thought of a weird variant of this a while back though human Sunset was closer to thirty and the story would start right after the first movie. I.e. Sunset was living with herself all this time and we get to see the reactions Principal Celestia and the humane 5have to her living situation. Other odd one I thought of around the same time was staying at Aloe and Lotus’s spa as a result of helping them fend off a violent customer.
you really need to make this a full story and dont do the conspiracy theory thing it would be in character for twilight but it would kinda drag the story its self down
well this will be a awkward family I WANT MORE
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I do want to get back to this story and flesh it out at some point! I'm not sure what you meant about the conspiracy theory comment? I'll be honest, if I did it, I would focus mostly on the interpersonal development.
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yea i did meant that comment as i said it would just kinda hurt the story if you did it either way i do want you to make this a full story
Both those alternatives have potential.
I like the second option more, but would read either.
Wow. Every single one of theses story ideas with any plot line set choices would make for an amazing story, honestly. The hard part now would be deciding which story would be done first and with which story line to do it with. XD
Either way, I would so read any of these.
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Well I am working one one, but I want to finish Making Family's real path first. I only have a chapter or so written, but the concept throws in a few more elements I like into the mix.
I don't know why everypony wants Sunset to be hurt fighting Nightmare Moon. I don't think Sunset would lose because Nightmare Moon is the parallel to Sunset stealing the element of magic. Just like Sunset Nightmare Moon did everything to guide the main 6 to blasting her with the elements.
If I had the skill the way I would do The Mirror and the Moon is have Sunset ditch the ponies she needs to get to Ponyville and set a trap to even things out for a fight with Nightmare Moon but have those ponies follow her and she tries to ditch them some more times before giving up. When the trap basically beats Nightmare Moon Sunset would call out Nightmare Moon for faking, Nightmare Moon would get Sunset to reveal she wants Celestia to adopt her and they would end up agreeing to work out things Celestia and Sunset admits the ponies she met are probably her friends. Friendship, therapy, working things out with Celestia and Celestia trying to force the elements out would be done in the next arc.
Yeah, I can honestly see this happening in Sunset's first year here.
You know, she might be on to something about that terraforming project, just talking to the wrong Celestia.
I'm a huge fan of Bakarina. So for the love of faust make it a full fic and let Sunset obtain a bisexual harem with her future friends but she only see them as friends cause she's too busy redeeming herself she seduced them..also the Dazzlings. Maybe.
Sunset is either oblivious to the affection her 'friends' gave her or she hands wave it off as "This is how they are before i messed it up for them. "
you write interesting bits and i hope to see more of them the sunset doover is something i would probably love if you wrote it even if just up to stealing the crown, if she actually steals it or just goes back to equestria, if she make friends and family before this canon starts
write 'do over' as a full story. I love the peggy sue concept
Out of all of your stories I've read, this is the one I hope you come back to the most. I absolutely love this idea. We dont get enough sunset fics with her doing stuff other than 'anonamiss happened now all my friends are mean' or 'man I used to be such an asshole'. Having her come back for some gold is definetly in character for pre rainbow laser sunset, and her being back in equestria (or never leaving in the first place) is such a unique and rarely explored story line.
As for which way I think it should go from here, having her fight luna trying to escape would be the most likely situation, but considering sunset hasn't used magic in like 3 years and luna is an alicorn, sunset (despite putting up a hell of a fight) would probably lose. Weather she succeeds in fending off luna long enough to get to the portal or getting blocked off from escape I really cant say since both paths have their benefits, although I'd like celestia to have an active role in this story and sunset staying seems to be the best bet for that.