I woke up and checked the calendar and it's Friday which means I'm going to have tea with the Spirit of Chaos and the Element of Kindness. I did my morning routine and checked the time. 7:10 I need to kill some time. I thought. So to solve this I decided to play with Emma, my pet basilisk, in the basement which is a pocket dimension I made just for her.
4 Hours Later
"Bye Emma I need to go now," I said to a large green scaled snake with large fangs and glowing green eyes.
"Bye Master see you next time," said my adorable snake monster, Emma. After closing the door I checked the time. It's 11:50. I have five more minutes, might as well be there early a little early I thought. I exited my house and went to Fluttershy's place. I knocked on the door. "Come in," said Fluttershy's voice. When I entered I saw a floating table holding a teapot and three teacups and there are three chairs accompanying it. In one chair was Fluttershy and the other has the one, the only Spirit of Chaos, Discord who's wearing a jacket that says 'Chaos Rules' along with yellow pants.
"Oh hello Shade, I would like you to meet Discord, Discord this is Shade," Fluttershy introduced us to each other.
"Hello Discord it's an honor to meet the Spirit of Chaos face to face," I said to him.
"Why thank you, dear, it's a pleasure to meet you as well," said Discord and his smugness tastes really good, I have no idea why. "Would you like some help getting on your seat?" he asked like a gentleman/gentlecolt.
"No thank you I'll be fine," was my answer.
I then jumped up and landed sitting on top of my chair. Fluttershy looked slightly surprised. "What? The figure isn't just looks," I said to that."So how has your week been dear Shade?" Discord asked me. "It's been fine, I recently got a pet basilisk at Monday along with moving in town and such, went to the spa with Fluttershy and Rarity, tried finding a job in town along with playing with Emma, which is my basilisk's name, so not much really. How about you two?" I said in three seconds flat.
The two took a moment to process that and Discord said, "Well I've just been doing small pranks around Equestria and been looking for a magical anomaly I sensed."
"I've just been taking care of the animals, welcoming Shade to Ponyville, had some spa time with Shade and Rarity like Shade said, and that's about it," was Fluttershy's response.
"Hmm so Shade how do you like your tea?" asked Discord.
My necked jerked. "Cold with two drops of honey, like my heart," I said with a depressed tone in my voice. My neck jerked again and I was normal yet again. "Sorry about that, it happens a lot," I said. Discord was looking at me with a critical eye for a second before snapping his eagle talon and I found a cup of tea in my hand. I took a sip of it. It. Was. Amazing.
"This is really good," I commented.
"Why thank you I made it myself," said Discord again with pride. Pride tastes so good when it comes from him. Why? I wonder in my head. After that, we chatted and talked until it was time to go.
"Goodbye. It was very nice having tea with you two," I said standing from my seat, which was back on the floor. After the two lovebirds (that's right everyone I ship it) said bye I left and went to try and get a stable job.
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"Anyway" (gotta laugh at yourself too, right?
oh nooo it was sooooooo gooooood
I'm just experiencing writers block. I will come back soon.
Yea you have nothing to worry about.
Rushed and cliched. You might want to study some of the successful fics and find out why/how they became successful before continuing.
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I'm not sure where this cliche started, but having an imaginary conversation with a fictional character is kinda cringey. Not ha-ha cringey, but /r9k/ cringey.
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Almost everything has been done so its kinda hard to have an original idea😕
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Sad but true.
Mortal minds can only think so much before there is nothing original left to think of. The same thing happens with immortals even.
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I mean the pinkie 4th wall breaking meme, in my opinion, it's overused, to the point where it's in almost every successful story. Not every, but a lot of them do have her. But there are cases where she's just... IS there... But she isn't at the same time. Like the copy from the show. I mean WHY do you need her to break EVERY kind of logic that exists? Isn't things that she's doing NOT enough?
P.s. sorry for a lot of salt. I like pinkie as she is, I approve it when people use her to hype people for the next chapter, or something epic to happen in the story. But using her for just some non-sense talk? I see no point...
space slug no like salt
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Well i do have 2 ideas but my computer died
What sounds better
A changeling that has been secretly buying out companys to take conrol of equestria
Or
Death taking a vaction to just to screw around with the ponies😎
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Death taking a vacation to just screw around with the ponies.
storyline seems a bit weak so far... needs an actual long-term goal... or at least a side-quest... TACTICAL OC!!!!!
(in other words, I get the feeling that having yet another semi-omnipotent character in the mix, particularly as a rival or opponent to the main character, might greatly increase the entertainment value of this story.)
but that's just my guess. go ahead and do whatever ya want. although an overall rewrite on the story as a whole might be a good idea too...
what even is this story?
is it shitpost?
oh god i hope its shitpost and not serious
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If it was a ‘shitpost’ it would’ve had one chapter and nothing more I believe. I seriously write this and take it seriously.
Don’t like it? Go ahead and down vote it then, it’s your choice if you like it or not.