Twilight asks Spike to take some photos of her and the girls for a calendar, but for some reason they're posing really saucily, and—hold on, are they all coming on to him?
This is great I am happy to see a new chapter to this for sure. I hope we get to see a chapter for each girl. I don't know if he will end up hooking up with each girl. I honestly think it should be just each girl teasing the hell out of him and them maybe talking about their feelings as he take his pictures of them. Ending with him and Twilight and them taking photos for the shoot, and then taking some photos of them mating. I honestly so see it being from this point onward Spike and Twilight being a thing and regularly going at it. I can see a story of her getting knocked up by Spike and while she is nice and big they have a sexy maternity shoot lol. Which I can see after this story there being connected stories of his first time with each girl and the new herd they end up forming all centered around Spike, his camera, and whatever unique kinks each girl might have.
9197450 I mean, hey, it says 'suggestive' on Derpi. They're technically 'featureless crotches', according to the tags. I'm 99.99% sure I'm alright this time.
I think i'll just hit the track list. Who knows how many chapters this might hold I hope more than 4 at least. However, I can't judge this fiction till it's complete.
Starlight hadn't said a word about it either, but he noticed that she too didn't seem at all as bothered about the presence of his camera now. She didn't offer up lewd poses for him to capture like Twilight did
"Damn. If I do a good job, can I still have the gems?" Spike bit his lip, tail twitching, and grinned when Twilight nodded.
: "Maybe even an handful of Rarity's Gems, if you know what I mean..."
Only to find Starlight sitting on his bed, in his bedroom. "Whafahuh?!" Spike eloquently spouted, hands instantly returning to his crotch, and Starlight only sighed. "You really don't have any shame any more, do you? You just walk around the castle hard now, taking photos of Twilight every time she flashes herself at you?"
: "Says the mare sprawled out on my bed!"
"I mean..." Starlight searched for words, waving her hoof around. "Just because I'm shocked, doesn't mean I'm not a little bit excited to try it on. It might be liberating, after all. Kinda wish it had came with some underwear, though..."
: "Nah, it's perfect this way."
Maybe if you're lucky, I'll be your little maid for a while after our part of the shoot's done.
Sounds good!
Good chapter! I can't wait to see what the girls are up to!
Hope there will be some actual dom/sub tones in this. Considering all the things that Spike fantasized about in the prequel, and for nothing like that to come of it, was a bit of a dissapointment. And now you have Starlight here mentioning that she might be a maid to Spike. Really hope that you deliver :p
9197454 Never trust FimFiction. I made an anthro story with Spike and The CMC. The mods deleted it because the eighteen-year-old girls weren't eighteen. I lost bloody everything! Well, good story and everything that almost any author hears.
This is great I am happy to see a new chapter to this for sure. I hope we get to see a chapter for each girl. I don't know if he will end up hooking up with each girl. I honestly think it should be just each girl teasing the hell out of him and them maybe talking about their feelings as he take his pictures of them. Ending with him and Twilight and them taking photos for the shoot, and then taking some photos of them mating. I honestly so see it being from this point onward Spike and Twilight being a thing and regularly going at it. I can see a story of her getting knocked up by Spike and while she is nice and big they have a sexy maternity shoot lol. Which I can see after this story there being connected stories of his first time with each girl and the new herd they end up forming all centered around Spike, his camera, and whatever unique kinks each girl might have.
You're living life on the edge with that cover art, my man.
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I mean, hey, it says 'suggestive' on Derpi. They're technically 'featureless crotches', according to the tags. I'm 99.99% sure I'm alright this time.
9197454
Hey if it's not, just leave a half link to it in the description like everyone else does.
9197454
I've gotten covers taken down for less. The mods don't really abide by a particularly predictable standard unfortunately.
Eyes thumbnail with suspicion, wondering if the mods will let it slide
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Let me say this.... You got my attention with the cover photo!!! Cant wait for more
well this went to my tracking folder faster than anything else.
YES!!! It continues!
He has.....the Magikz
I think i'll just hit the track list. Who knows how many chapters this might hold I hope more than 4 at least. However, I can't judge this fiction till it's complete.
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More than four, no doubt.
I never done seen so many pony ass in a story art!
I really hope Chrysalis is in this, as well as Zecora. I would love that!!
...that cover art...it makes me weep tears of joy...
wow this was realy good, i can't wait.
That cover art... Dang. Now that's super borderline. But, hey? I don't think it violates the rules to be honest.
That's a lot of butts.
: "Maybe even an handful of Rarity's Gems, if you know what I mean..."
: "Says the mare sprawled out on my bed!"
: "Nah, it's perfect this way."
Sounds good!
Good chapter!
I can't wait to see what the girls are up to!
Found something you may check:
In fact, that's probably a typo...
Hopefully this doesn't turn out to be a full on tease story. That would be cruel and disappointing.
Looking forward to more!
I like butts.
Hope there will be some actual dom/sub tones in this. Considering all the things that Spike fantasized about in the prequel, and for nothing like that to come of it, was a bit of a dissapointment. And now you have Starlight here mentioning that she might be a maid to Spike. Really hope that you deliver :p
Moar plz
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And I cannot lie!
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And you other brothers can't deny
9197454
Never trust FimFiction. I made an anthro story with Spike and The CMC. The mods deleted it because the eighteen-year-old girls weren't eighteen. I lost bloody everything! Well, good story and everything that almost any author hears.
9201008
Did it explicitly say they were 18 in the description and in the story itself?
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Did after the first block. Plus the story didn't raise any flags until chapter seven.
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Did you post it on other sites, likr Pastebin?
Ooh. Questionable...
"The alternative was something he didn't even want to think about, which contrasted heavily with just how much he wanted to think about it."
That made me laugh. Great line, that one.