Spike travels once again to the world of comics in order to know more about Hum Drum's true potential as a hero... what he founds could mean a once in a lifetime opportunity for him. And for Rarity, a crusade to save her friend's chastity
In my opinion, leave Spike in his real body, not Humdrumâs. Two reasons: one, it would be more canon to the show, and two, Spike, being a dragon instead of a colt, has two hand-like claws, a long, prehensile tongue, and a ridged (possibly two) dick(s). (More options for pleasing a mare(s).)
Lol keep him pure say the mare who hasn't given any good physical lovin attention to spike. I say let him have his fantasies in the comic it ain't hurting anyone. I like the idea of literally going into a comic and experience those fanatsies. Good story
I think this is a very interesting story and I like what you have done with some character building here. I do tho find Rarity and Spike with such a odd relationship to be honesty. I mean she herself has stated that Spike is adult really in every sense of the world. But she treat him JUST like a child, she even took his book and was about to destroy it without even caring what he could say or feel. There are a few more sense that support this but it just comes off as odd that Spike is just taking all of this with a smile not even showing any internal conflict about her treatment of him. But then she goes and shows some very possessive characteristics but it is unknown what the base of that comes from. Is it romantic or just she feels like deep down no one should have him but her and nothing should risk taking his attention from her? Honestly at the moment it feels the later one is the moth likely since we haven't seen anything so far to show romantic interest from her but it is just the first chapter. And what if the PP treat Spike not as a child or as a side character, or as a pack mule, but as a equal in all respects how much would that mean to him to be treated and respected like everyone else for once.
8769645 8769653 8770353 8770394 8771435 Thank you all for the support. I'll give more hindsight about what really happens between Rares and Spike in the next chapter. Hopefully, I'll finish the edition of it between tomorrow and the Tuesday.
I definitely like the start of this, especially since it's showing that there are some feelings for a couple of the Power Ponies (the actual ones, not the Mane 6 in Power Pony cosplay).
Also to the one that was commenting on how they wish Spike in the Humdrum Costume would be in his actual dragon form as opposed to a Quantum Leap thing where everypony in the comic see Humdrum as a pony but we the audience see Spike in Humdrum's body, I would love to see that as well...though it would be interesting to have the actual Power Ponies see Humdrum as a dragon instead of a pony.
Off topic, but I wonder why no one has thought about the idea of the Mane 6 and Spike meeting the actual Power Ponies, similar to what happened in the S7 finale Shadow Play, where the Elements Bearers meet the actual predercesors to the Elemenst--The Pillars of Harmony (StarSwirl and the Legends). Just a thought.
In my opinion, leave Spike in his real body, not Humdrumâs. Two reasons: one, it would be more canon to the show, and two, Spike, being a dragon instead of a colt, has two hand-like claws, a long, prehensile tongue, and a ridged (possibly two) dick(s). (More options for pleasing a mare(s).)
Excellent start to a very interesting story can't wait for more to come hopefully!
Lol keep him pure say the mare who hasn't given any good physical lovin attention to spike. I say let him have his fantasies in the comic it ain't hurting anyone.
I like the idea of literally going into a comic and experience those fanatsies.
Good story
I think this is a very interesting story and I like what you have done with some character building here. I do tho find Rarity and Spike with such a odd relationship to be honesty. I mean she herself has stated that Spike is adult really in every sense of the world. But she treat him JUST like a child, she even took his book and was about to destroy it without even caring what he could say or feel. There are a few more sense that support this but it just comes off as odd that Spike is just taking all of this with a smile not even showing any internal conflict about her treatment of him. But then she goes and shows some very possessive characteristics but it is unknown what the base of that comes from. Is it romantic or just she feels like deep down no one should have him but her and nothing should risk taking his attention from her? Honestly at the moment it feels the later one is the moth likely since we haven't seen anything so far to show romantic interest from her but it is just the first chapter. And what if the PP treat Spike not as a child or as a side character, or as a pack mule, but as a equal in all respects how much would that mean to him to be treated and respected like everyone else for once.
Rarity's going Semi-Yandere.
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Thank you all for the support. I'll give more hindsight about what really happens between Rares and Spike in the next chapter. Hopefully, I'll finish the edition of it between tomorrow and the Tuesday.
I definitely like the start of this, especially since it's showing that there are some feelings for a couple of the Power Ponies (the actual ones, not the Mane 6 in Power Pony cosplay).
Also to the one that was commenting on how they wish Spike in the Humdrum Costume would be in his actual dragon form as opposed to a Quantum Leap thing where everypony in the comic see Humdrum as a pony but we the audience see Spike in Humdrum's body, I would love to see that as well...though it would be interesting to have the actual Power Ponies see Humdrum as a dragon instead of a pony.
Off topic, but I wonder why no one has thought about the idea of the Mane 6 and Spike meeting the actual Power Ponies, similar to what happened in the S7 finale Shadow Play, where the Elements Bearers meet the actual predercesors to the Elemenst--The Pillars of Harmony (StarSwirl and the Legends). Just a thought.
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