Submissive Thorax learns from a young age how much his brother likes burying his ovipositor inside him, dominating him brutally until he fills him with sticky fluid - the problem is how much Thorax likes it, too...
The first two chapters seemed a little repetitive of one another, and to be honest, a little bland with character personality, especially from Thorax. This chapter was a lot better. It had a lot more going on with the premise, had more personality depth from the brothers as they went into the feeding dilemma and their opposing views, and overall Thorax was a lot more expressive with his thoughts - very nice. To me, the best clopfics are ones that bother to display a little story and character building too, not just focus on the sex and show little else. This chapter did that pretty well.
The first two chapters seemed a little repetitive of one another, and to be honest, a little bland with character personality, especially from Thorax. This chapter was a lot better. It had a lot more going on with the premise, had more personality depth from the brothers as they went into the feeding dilemma and their opposing views, and overall Thorax was a lot more expressive with his thoughts - very nice. To me, the best clopfics are ones that bother to display a little story and character building too, not just focus on the sex and show little else. This chapter did that pretty well.