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A Cute Letter

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Hi i'm Twilight Sparkle,this morning i got letter it was heart shaped letter with pink ribbon on it, but there is no sender there. I will read the letter.

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B4ssxCello

B4ssxCello #1 · Feb 24th, 2018 · · ·

This story feels really disjointed and hard to follow. The grammar/punctuation is hard to understand and it just feels rushed. However not to be mean, you really should look into finding someone to help you smooth this story out. I did find it interesting, if you’d like I could help a bit with it

Anonomis

Anonomis #2 · Feb 24th, 2018 · · ·

8756174
Agreed. This was interesting, but hard to follow.
Perhaps after it is fixed, a second chapter could be added for the aftermath.

B4ssxCello

B4ssxCello #3 · Feb 24th, 2018 · · ·

8756574
I’ve offered some help, But it all comes down to the author if they’d like it or not

Bzero

Bzero #4 · Feb 25th, 2018 · · ·

8756174
Yeah your'e right, Because the story come up from my wildest dream so i just write it down before i forgot it and also english is not my native lang

Bzero