Just found this and then realized I have 2 other stories to read first. Well I best get started.

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I'm sorry. They're long, so feel free to pace yourself.

Thank you for daring to dive in.

I found the first two stories this weekend and read both. I like smut as much as the next person, but I love well written smut that finds a way to make the sex a natural pert of the story. These did that and I enjoyed all of them immensely.

My only... not really criticism, I guess you'd call it an unfulfilled desire, would be to see the events at the spa from Sunset's POV. I'm curious what was going through her head during all that.

Great job!

So to be clear, this is a Sonshy fic right?

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They bang. Cloudkicker would be proud.

This fic, is, perhaps, the greatest clop fic ever written. All the word hang together like a pair of large breasts draped over a smaller chick's shoulders. Beautiful. Some have asked, is this is a sonshy fic? the answer is no, because fluttershy is a girl, and therefore its a daughtershy fic. Unless Fluttershy evens up knocked up because of Sonta playing with her skin flute.

If there is one downside to this fic, it's the amount of the water. It either has too much, or too little. Frankly, we spent too much time waiting for this fic to finish being birthed by norm, and now we're all moistened by the experience.

Design: ***/4
Storytelling: ****/4
appropriate use of butt: *******/4
horseyness: -***/4

This comment section is suffering from too much help.

And there goes my sleep time. But it was worth it. All 3 stories, or rather 3 chapters of one story. ;)
And, while I never really care about Treehugger, you make her a whole new being, much deeper. Thank you for that.

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You are a monster and I approve.
So thanks for that.

Welp, I know what I'm doing for my lunch break.

Begins the reading.

EDIT: Done.

That. Was. I just... MMMMMM.

Thank you. Starred.

Not really finished?

... yeah, I can see that. We're missing the last phrase of the chorus. XD

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They might be healed, but there's still a little matter of separating them from their magic-bearers now.

<Aria> *folding her arms* This is gonna be a challenge.

<Treehugger> *stretching an arm behind her head* Tell me about it, babe.

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Sunset was emotionally in pieces and I don't think she even knew it. It's probably why she pushed so hard to save the Sirens.

Once the adrenaline wore off from the concert, and she woke up the next morning, she needed a mission to keep from sinking back into the depths of a magical trough. And I don't think the annoyance of Rarity going "Yes, darling, one good bang ought to take care of things" helped. Once she reached the spa, Aloe's attention broke down the last defense in her mind and she had to give in. Almost like a magical exorcism, except rather than clearing her out, she overloaded on emotion and energy. That's how Aria got slammed.

My friend, this was wonderful. I can't wait to see where this story goes from here.

Huh, can't believe I missed this releasing. Very good stuff, although Treehugger manages to absolutely steal the show.

Surprised I missed this considering how much I loved the other two. Looking forward to reading this later.