Looking forward to seeing a corporation being torn apart.

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Well, the group ARE effectively terrorists and they WERE using torture.

yeah, i'm liking this.

you have the legions support

MADNESS!?

THIS. IS. EQUESTRIA!!!!! *SPARTAN KICKS KOTTA IN A BOTTOMLESS PIT*

I like, more please!?

You know what on second thought I think I’ll just slip into a nice recovery coma for a couple hours.

Wakes up three months later.

This is going pretty good,keep up the work.

Book is good, more.

Subject has evolved the ability to assimilate the genetics and memories from his victims, to which he is able to shift into their form. More data is required. End log#0002

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So... Basically Alex Mercer?

10/10

Please continue

Isn't the cover art a Gauna?

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Perhaps

I’m not sure why Murphy decided to fuck me in the ass.

When this is the first thing I see when i open a fic, I know I found a good one. Continue on my friend.

dos capítulos y ya tienes 100 likes, claramente lo haces bien.
espero que se divierta con la capacidad de cambiar de cuerpo.

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Intentaré no decepcionar.

Huh, my fellow skull enthusiast got featured. I see about reading this latter.

Quality work.

Its only a matter of time before the Equestrian Royalty (Celestia and Luna) or Twilight discovers the reason why Noah was taking down his tormentors and the corrupt company. This is only the beginning and pandora's box has yet to be TRULY opened...

Haven't read any of this yet, but i am excited to read it. You got my hopes up man!

The bio reminds me if another story where a human wakes up in a pony laboratory with powers and tries to escape, thats pretty good too but it's sad that i don't remember the name of it.

You need to learn where commas are needed in more complex sentences. Other than that this story is excellent. Keep up the good work!

Now this is something I can enjoy.

Well now, this has become quite good. I shall continue to wait for your next chapter.
So far everything makes sense and flows well Thumbs Up to you!

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I think it's due to people comparing nano/nanite-swarms to AI or robotics and don not consider that there could be an organic varient of said occurrence.
I THINK in organics it is called the Grey Goo ....NOPE NEVER MIND
It is called Grey Goo only in terms of machine nanites
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Grey_goo

What WOULD a organic living varient be called?

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np

When is next chapter coming out I need moar

You have several gramatical issues you might want to look into (especially in the first chapter) but other than that good start, will eagerly wait for more have a good day .

Esperando esperando

MOAR

Please make more, I really like where this is going

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Soon, I haven't forgotten about it.