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Initially thought this was about the Doctor or Doctor Whooves. But this seems just as interesting. Looking forward to see how you expand your universe!
In major need of edits and storytelling that isn't 99% exposition.
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Yes yes it does. This was something I saw in my head one night then this morning when I woke up with it again needed to have others hear it. Agreed alot of exposition but also wrote this quickly. I wiil provably restructure this a bit. And edit it more later. Thank you for the criticism I do appreciate it. I honestly prefer blunt crticism over others so thank you.
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Cool thank you for the interest and I hope I can decide what to do with this
Who else thought this was a doctor who story
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At least one other person. I changed the quote to something more original. It dodn’t click until now, sorry but I do hope you enjoyed the story. So going to edit this.
Their is no worse villain then the one of your own making. For they will not rest untill they make you suffer and they hold no restrictions on what they will do. The only way to stop them is to be the villain your self and kill them and every time you see them every time you face them and that moment either you or they fall you will remember. That It Was All Your Fault