• Member Since 15th Dec, 2017
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Cloper69


A guy who likes to read clop, and has decided to write some.

Comments ( 16 )

Why isn't there a tragedy tag?

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Thanks for the point out.

Snuff isn't my thing so admittedly the ending turned me off. (The parallel worlds/"it was just a dream"-stuff is bullshit. Just lean into it.)

That said, the story isn't bad but its way too fast.

The sentence is DEATH . . . by snu- snu

Is the cockvore going to be a recurring theme, because I hope so

I think you should tag this with gore, or at least tag snuff/decapitation in the chapter content warnings. I was not prepared for that. x.x

I enjoyed it quite a bit up to that though, I just expected the death tag to only apply to the initial cock vore and cum conversion, rather than what happened to Twilight’s Head...

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Done! Thanks for pointing that out.

I'd be game for a sequel. Would it be exploring the thing you alluded to at the end?

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A little. More later on than at first.

Wow, this managed to be lazier in plotting than most of the vore fics I've come across.

Fetishism in the most minimalist form possible. I suppose that's an achievement in the race to the bottom.

Wait, so is there going to be more to this story or a sequel, because only having this chapter as the last one with this cliff hanger at the end really throw's things for a loop.

I think you ended it well enough. No need for a sequel.

You left it on a LORD OF THE RINGS-esque cliff hanger... don't tell me you're seriously considering ending it there...

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