Loved it!! It's a shame there isn't more stories like this one. I'm definitely looking forward to the coming chapters. Hopefully, the princesses get involved some, too.
Something you could do in a coming chapter(it doesn't matter when) is have Twilight turn the tables on Rainbow by making her stupid and stealing her dick, which of course Twilight would then fuck her with.
I'm also glad you didn't go down the point of no-return with having Rainbow dump Twilight's intelligence down the drain. I don't mind how dumb or impaired Twilight becomes; I only stop enjoying it when it becomes permanent.
8710946 I have plans for Celestia to get involved, in a non-sexual capacity (for now, we'll see how things go). There will be sexual encounters with other gals, but that's all I'm willing to say right now.
I don't think Twi is gonna make Dash dumb, cause I personally find that kinda boring, but I do have plans to have them swap equipment. When that happens, though, Dash will remain entirely in control.
I also don't like permanent solutions in these instances, but mainly because Twilight normally comes out of it really sad. If this ends up being for keeps (and I don't think it will), it will be in such a way that both ladies end up happy.
I hope to keep you happy with the next flood of perversion.
TWILIGHT is the one feeling guilty!? If Dash doesn't feel like a peice of shit after this, Twilight should just dump her. Sorry but this story gets me so mad.
Twilight wouldn't dump RD even if she didn't intend for Rainbow to sex her while stupid, because Twilight is smart enough to know that Dash would do something like that. If Twilight didn't want to be fucked while under the influences of the spell, she wouldn't have done it while Rainbow is around, because she knows Rainbow. At that point, it would be Twilight's fault.
Dash doesn't feel bad about it because, in her mind, she's not doing anything wrong. The reason being is my prior explanation: It's Twilight's fault for tempting Rainbow. They know each other well enough at this point that, after a certain point, it's no longer Dash's fault. I feel like I'm explaining this poorly, so here's an analogy.
If you leave a child in a room with paint, crayons, and permanent markers, you cannot blame the child when you come back to a room with colored walls. It is now your fault for leaving the child alone.
8711205 I suppose I see you point. Although it is coming awfully close to the idea of blaming the rape victim for the rape. I mean Dash is being stupidly selfish here, she even considered not restoring Twilight (even if it was just for a moment) and Twilight is worrying about Dash's feelings? Like I said, Dash should feel horrible about herself at this point, and if she doesn't then she needs a swift kick in the nuts.
I just hope Dash comes to realize what an amazing girlsfriend she has. One who is willing to do very dangerous things to herself just for her pleasure.
“You’re m-making me feel funny,” whimpered Twilight. Rainbow had to restrain herself after hearing that, lest she actually hurt Twilight by rushing in too quickly. Rainbow didn’t want that. She’d take advantage of her girlfriend, fuck her while she was too stupid to say no, but she would never actually physically hurt her.
8711237 It's not coming close to blaming the victim. It is literally blaming the victim.
I never said Dash was a good person. Just wanted to explain why their relationship would persist.
Dash is acutely aware that her gf is rad. And she should feel bad. She doesn't, and Twi doesn't expect her to. Don't worry too much about the morality of what happens between these two. They love each other and are happy regardless of what fucked up things RD does, so who are we to judge them?
Okay, so silly question, but if dumping the vial meant Twilight loosing that bit of intelligence forever, then what happens if someone else drinks it? Do they gain the intelligence?
“Nope. I just heard ‘naked’ and felt my dick tingle.”
Classy.
“What I want is a nice, long…” Twilight gave Rainbow’s cock a gentle, but taunting, slap, then rolled off of her. “Peaceful night’s sleep.”
That's cruel.
“You’re not stupid. I’m not smarter than you. We’re just smart in different ways,” said Twilight. “And I’m sorry if I anything I ever said to you made you feel lesser than me.”
OH.
“Of course, I remember. I wasn’t stupid when I made the spell. Besides, it wouldn’t be hard to put two and two together.” Twilight pointed to her her head, which was matted with Rainbow’s seed. “You didn’t clean the cum out of my hair.”
A fair point.
“Punishment? Who said anything about punishment,” said Twilight with a raised eyebrow. “Rainbow, I didn’t just anticipate this. Iintendedfor this to happen. I wanted to see what you’d do before we got into the good stuff.”
Wow, she DID outsmart you.
“Oh yeah. But, before we do that…” Twilight used her magic to conjure a quill and a roll of parchment. “Let’s establish some ground rules, shall we?”
8711818 The ground rules that Twilight is about to lay down are gonna be exclusively to allow me to let Rainbow do some fucked up shit with Twilight's permission.
Dang, I thought this story couldn't get better, but then Twilight actually shows her intelligence like this? Way to go Twilight, this is gonna be fun!
Wow LewdChapter, you really meant it with Twilight getting dumb for Rainbow... there relationship is so oddly sweet when I think about it, they understand each other well enough to really know each other and prepare (at least Twilight can...) accordingly.
I must say though, Rainbow Dash kinda put a toe (or hoof? hooved toe?) over her "don't hurt Twilight physically" line. Not to say it's a big deal, just thought I should say it. I suppose that provides a good incentive for Twilight to take things to the next level like she did.
Awww come on, that would've been the PERFECT time to have a super fluffy scene and heart-to-heart talk right there! I even started to doubt you when Dash started to ponder on whether she should keep twiggy that way, and then Twilight telling her that she remembers and that she doesn't think she's stupid and all that? You can't just make me feel like that and leave me high and dry, that's fucking evil, even though I kinda understand that this may not be your thing
This went in a surprisingly less terribly dark direction than I expected.
It's still a bit odd having Twilight do all of the 'heavy listing' as far as accountability goes. Rainbow goes so far as to consider (essentially) murdering her girlfriend before coming back from that ledge in a show of what could almost be considered responsibility.
At what point does the whole element of Loyalty thing kick in? Is that what's keeping her from going through with it? You've said she's not a good person in this fic, so is it just her base programming at this point that's keeping her from destroying Twilight and literally nothing else? If so it kinda puts the whole "love" thing on some shaky ground.
Hopefully this is visited in the "ground rules"--that, or Twilight has a failsafe.
Quality writing Daddu-chan!
Loved it!! It's a shame there isn't more stories like this one. I'm definitely looking forward to the coming chapters. Hopefully, the princesses get involved some, too.
Something you could do in a coming chapter(it doesn't matter when) is have Twilight turn the tables on Rainbow by making her stupid and stealing her dick, which of course Twilight would then fuck her with.
I'm also glad you didn't go down the point of no-return with having Rainbow dump Twilight's intelligence down the drain. I don't mind how dumb or impaired Twilight becomes; I only stop enjoying it when it becomes permanent.
Can't wait for the next chapter. =)
I audibly giggled.
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I have plans for Celestia to get involved, in a non-sexual capacity (for now, we'll see how things go). There will be sexual encounters with other gals, but that's all I'm willing to say right now.
I don't think Twi is gonna make Dash dumb, cause I personally find that kinda boring, but I do have plans to have them swap equipment. When that happens, though, Dash will remain entirely in control.
I also don't like permanent solutions in these instances, but mainly because Twilight normally comes out of it really sad. If this ends up being for keeps (and I don't think it will), it will be in such a way that both ladies end up happy.
I hope to keep you happy with the next flood of perversion.
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I don't think I've ever made someone giggle with one of these fics before. So thanks for that strange new notch on my belt.
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Is your pepe hard?
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I happily await then. =)
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Yus.
TWILIGHT is the one feeling guilty!? If Dash doesn't feel like a peice of shit after this, Twilight should just dump her. Sorry but this story gets me so mad.
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I may as well address this.
Twilight wouldn't dump RD even if she didn't intend for Rainbow to sex her while stupid, because Twilight is smart enough to know that Dash would do something like that. If Twilight didn't want to be fucked while under the influences of the spell, she wouldn't have done it while Rainbow is around, because she knows Rainbow. At that point, it would be Twilight's fault.
Dash doesn't feel bad about it because, in her mind, she's not doing anything wrong. The reason being is my prior explanation: It's Twilight's fault for tempting Rainbow. They know each other well enough at this point that, after a certain point, it's no longer Dash's fault. I feel like I'm explaining this poorly, so here's an analogy.
If you leave a child in a room with paint, crayons, and permanent markers, you cannot blame the child when you come back to a room with colored walls. It is now your fault for leaving the child alone.
8711205 I suppose I see you point. Although it is coming awfully close to the idea of blaming the rape victim for the rape. I mean Dash is being stupidly selfish here, she even considered not restoring Twilight (even if it was just for a moment) and Twilight is worrying about Dash's feelings? Like I said, Dash should feel horrible about herself at this point, and if she doesn't then she needs a swift kick in the nuts.
I just hope Dash comes to realize what an amazing girlsfriend she has. One who is willing to do very dangerous things to herself just for her pleasure.
I wish i could read
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It's not coming close to blaming the victim. It is literally blaming the victim.
I never said Dash was a good person. Just wanted to explain why their relationship would persist.
Dash is acutely aware that her gf is rad. And she should feel bad. She doesn't, and Twi doesn't expect her to. Don't worry too much about the morality of what happens between these two. They love each other and are happy regardless of what fucked up things RD does, so who are we to judge them?
Okay, so silly question, but if dumping the vial meant Twilight loosing that bit of intelligence forever, then what happens if someone else drinks it? Do they gain the intelligence?
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Theoretically. That idea will probably never be explored, so, for now, let's just say "yeah".
awesome
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I love this so much.
Classy.
That's cruel.
OH.
A fair point.
Wow, she DID outsmart you.
That's probably for the best.
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thank
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The ground rules that Twilight is about to lay down are gonna be exclusively to allow me to let Rainbow do some fucked up shit with Twilight's permission.
Things are about to get weird for Twilight.
How much dumber are we gonna get here? please say a lot
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So dumb that Dash will soon have to start using words a lot harsher than "dumb"
Dang, I thought this story couldn't get better, but then Twilight actually shows her intelligence like this? Way to go Twilight, this is gonna be fun!
Wow LewdChapter, you really meant it with Twilight getting dumb for Rainbow... there relationship is so oddly sweet when I think about it, they understand each other well enough to really know each other and prepare (at least Twilight can...) accordingly.
I must say though, Rainbow Dash kinda put a toe (or hoof? hooved toe?) over her "don't hurt Twilight physically" line. Not to say it's a big deal, just thought I should say it. I suppose that provides a good incentive for Twilight to take things to the next level like she did.
Awww come on, that would've been the PERFECT time to have a super fluffy scene and heart-to-heart talk right there!
I even started to doubt you when Dash started to ponder on whether she should keep twiggy that way, and then Twilight telling her that she remembers and that she doesn't think she's stupid and all that?
You can't just make me feel like that and leave me high and dry, that's fucking evil, even though I kinda understand that this may not be your thing
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You wouldn't know this by reading LewdChapter fics, but I'm a sucker for cheesy, corny romance stuff. You'll see some fluff soon enough.
This is even better than i though it would be (and I had fairly high expectations 😊)
also i agree with locky that a romancy-type talk would have been super cool.
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If you've ever read a fic of mine before, you should know better than to have high expectations. Glad you're liking it, though.
Don't worry, sappy romance is coming. In maybe... two or three chapters. Once I introduce some other players to the game.
This went in a surprisingly less terribly dark direction than I expected.
It's still a bit odd having Twilight do all of the 'heavy listing' as far as accountability goes. Rainbow goes so far as to consider (essentially) murdering her girlfriend before coming back from that ledge in a show of what could almost be considered responsibility.
At what point does the whole element of Loyalty thing kick in? Is that what's keeping her from going through with it? You've said she's not a good person in this fic, so is it just her base programming at this point that's keeping her from destroying Twilight and literally nothing else? If so it kinda puts the whole "love" thing on some shaky ground.
Hopefully this is visited in the "ground rules"--that, or Twilight has a failsafe.
Strange, how does Dumb Twilight remember what Smart Twilight doesn't? Unless...
Smart Twilight does remember and is just pulling one over on Rainbow
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Well it is easier to remember something simple than something complex