10146858
Thank you, Also, you have great timing

10148429
Heh, so I do, so I do.

Great chapter, can't wait for more!

10149729
Thank you

10149319
Thank you.

Is the description giving too much information? I'm not quite sure what's wrong with it.

10150435
A good description (as far as I know, at least) is supposed to let people know roughly what to expect, but at the same time be vague enough to not spoil any plot points. This description spoils quite a lot of plot points.

I'm probably not the one you should seek help from, though. Even writing this comment is mentally tiring for me. Instead, I think you should try to contact someone on this site that is more qualified, like Spacecowboy. He might be of more help.

10150513
ok, thank you

10150596
Oh, and please don't abandon this story like so many others have theirs. This story must be too great to not go unfinished.

10150783
Don't worry it won't be abandoned.

More plz

10226960
working on it, don't know how long it will be though

Awesome story. Definitely adding to my read list. Looking forward to the next update.

10265153
Thank you

The sex tag, is that by chance for future gay sex?

10305084
Nope

10305305
Well that's a shame.

dang, i read through this way to dang fast due to me wanting more! great story so far it has me on my toes wandering what will come next! looking forward to more!

So far it's promising!

This is an amazing and interesting fan fiction! But will there be a continuation of it?

So, good news and bad news.

Bad news first, after a few years of inactivity, I have decided to cancel this story. This is mainly from feeling like the story wasn't working well, and I had become undecided on how to progress it.

The good news is, that I'm rebooting the story, keeping the characters and some locations and mainly just changing the story's pace. I can't confirm when the first chapter of the reboot will be published but it is being worked on