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Late one night, Twilight has finished her latest spell. Nothing could go wrong testing it once to make sure it's stable, right?
She finds out how having a second horn around could quite literally save her life.
Set sometime after Twi got her castle, but before Starlight came about as Twilight's student Only because I completely forgot about her until like the very end and it wasn't going to be easy to slip her in, so... Sorry Glimglam fans.
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lol you’re an idiot (jk I like it so far. Keep going)
lol you're an idiot (c'mon you had to see this coming). I like this so far, I'm curious to see where it goes.
Can't wait to see Tia's reaction when she finds out the pony she usually goes to for help with these sort of things is...well...missing 😅
Can't wait to see Tia's reaction when she finds out the pony she usually goes to for help with these sort of things is...well...missing 😅
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Thanks. I've got more in store for you!
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(That I did. It's exactly why I said it.) And thank you! I hope you enjoy the rest of the ride. It's not long, but I hope you like it.
"Hmm, I want to court this mare, but her parents are dead, how can I ask their permission... Wait I know, time travel!" Your newest Princess everypony.
Thank you for sharing your story. I liked the set up and the resolution to the magical mishapp.
However, in a piece this length, I recommend focusing on either the magical danger or the romance. Celestia saving Twilight from dying seems to be the energy driving the story forward. I think that should be the focus.
Thanks again for sharing!
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the worst part is it fits her character perfectly
That was sweet, but in the way that fun-size packs of candy are sweet. It moved too fast to get connected to anything. No real worry for Twilight, no daww at the romance, no chance to get a sense of urgency goin.
Ah, well, still a fun little ride.
oh-oh-oh sorry about this but from here is a way to make it dark. due to the fact that this twilight is from an alternate universe (multiverse theroy(a different timeline in which Twilight was saved, and celestia's timeline twilight froze to death in space)) when Celestia returns home the spell sees twilight as a paradox due to the fact she no longer exists in that universe and the spell makes her fade from existence...
She teleported in space? Or teleported to an unknown location?
Sorry, I like guessing.
Well definitely an interesting story.