I could be wrong but it feels like Twilight and Celestia are acting a bit out of character.

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Not if you read Celestia’s Relaxing Vacation.

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Why would anyone with self respect do that?

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The same reason anyone with any self-respect does anything.

Also, I feel like "self-respect" is probably the wrong phrase to use there. I'm assuming that you're trying to insult people who read things you dislike (which is a problem in of itself that I genuinely don't have the energy to pick apart right now). But reading appalling fanfiction doesn't diminish the respect I have for myself. The respect others have for me, sure, but not my own personal self-respect.

Just saying, you might wanna workshop that particular diss.

“Dear, I intend to kill everyone at some point. I’m going to kill you all. Your friends. Your family. Everyone you’ve ever known and loved. I will raze your world to ash. I will ravage the soul of your very reality and then fuck the corpse. I will murder your species, take delight in the demise of every man, woman, and child that I encounter, pausing only to rape, torture, or cannibalize to my wicked heart’s content.” Celestia giggled at the thought. “But I presume you mean more in the short term?”

Holy shit- That was a crazy dark line. Good job my friend.

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Yeah, I felt the story to that point was too light-hearted. Needed darkening up.

What the fuuuuuck?

Then, it came to light that her parents had been cursed, and it was all that Sunset Shimmer’s fault. Her Equestrian magic polluted their minds, made them go mad. Naturally, Maud seeked her revenge on Sunset as well. Luckily, a strangely nude Twilight Sparkle came to her aid, and the two raped and tortured Sunset, with the goal of breaking Sunset’s magical hold over their world.

Zero: *Finishes reading the first two paragraphs* Merrybell please set up an appointment with our black cloaks. I need some people to disappear. Also need some bodies taken care of. But don't kill them. I want to deal with them myself.

Merry: yes sir

“Umf… She’s… Heavy…” grunted Twilight. Celestia grinned and used her magic to add two twenty-pound weights to Sunset’s pockets. “Hmf… I love you, my queen.”

Zero: sounds accurate. And people ask why I didn't like Twilight

Twilight slammed Sunset’s head firmly against the ground, knocking her dizzy. Sunset’s body rejected the act with every fiber in its being, wishing to sooner throw up than keep it down. But, with Twilight’s hand firmly clamped over her mouth, Sunset had no choice but to swallow the upcoming bile and the slimy, jiggly mass that was her eyeball. Sunset cried as she did, the feeling of her own eye sliding down her throat and falling into her belly a uniquely horrific experience. Twilight pried open Sunset’s mouth to ensure that she had swallowed the whole thing, then spat a big blob of bloody spit down her throat for good measure.

Now I'm a violent person and this gets a violent reaction out of me. Why am I still reading? Curiosity. Do I enjoy it? Hell no. Sunset is best Equestria girl and to have my enemy do this to someone I like is the exact reason I call it the circle of lives

Having read this I feel wrong

Challenged myself to read the hole thing, that includes guest chapters too.
My previous comment was rude,inconsiderate, and quite frankly uncalled for and the author of this story LewdChapter has my sincerest apologies.

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These types of comments always baffle me. Just the most pointless waste of text. Nobody cares that you're begrudgingly reading a story you won't like. Go read a better story.

Also, it's whole, not hole