Aka Redgrave lived in a world rule by demons and he is the last human alive, well part human anyway. Surviving and fighting against demons in hoping to save the world, but about to meet his end. Until a miracle he is sent him to anthro pony world.
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Can I please get a link to Equestrians Human Spirit?
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KO sure.
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/262213/equestrians-human-spirit
Hope you enjoy it like I do!
Damn dude. U want the girls to break there backs if they jump?
(jumps for joy) YYYAAAAA-CRACK-AAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!
Oh my god! What happened to you?
I broke my back cause I have these stupidly huge TITS!
We warned you not to jump.
Incase u didn't know. I'm screwing with ya. Here's a couple of gifs 4 ya.
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KO don’t, their bodies are stronger than they look.
Awsome start! I can't wait to 👀where this goes
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KO thanks, I promise this is gonna be an awesome story!
"Faith has spread him..."
There's already a few red flags, what's the harm of one more?
I'm really interested in the story, and all I have to say is the grammar gets me a little. But other than that I'm really looking forward to the rest of the story since there aren't many great DMC stories on this site. Hope to see more soon.
Can't wait for more. I love the devil may cry series and I hope you give it justice
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KO thanks and don’t there will be stylish justice!
not bad not bad at all I like to see more
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There is only one request I must make just make sense! Ok make that two and have FUN!
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KO thanks, it’s going to get more awesome from here.
I like red.
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KO cool, me too!
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Will you be requesting OCs later?
8626240
KO I don’t think so.
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Epic chapter, but y r u always begin ur sentences with KO?
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You were inspired by equestrians human spirit I LOVE THAT STORY! I'm currently rereading and it's still awesome, what made you want to write a story from it?
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KO yeah, it’s kind of a catchphrase for me for as long as I can remember.
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KO reading more was SO awesome that I wanted to write something like that but couldn’t get the idea. At first I wanted to do Fist of the North Star though I think that’s for another story I may do in the future, then came to me of Devil May Cry considering Equestrian Human Spirit has monsters and powers, that when the idea of inspiration hit me harder than a meteor!
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Well good luck on the story I hope it's good and it already has potential. Also what MILFS are gonna be in his harem, can I suggest you add a mule into the group, never read any anthro harem fics with a mule or donkey in it plus they exist in the tv show so it might be interesting.
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KO not sure about donkeys or mules, I’ll think about it.
I saw a few minor spelling errors, mostly from words that sound similar, so nothing too distracting. And I'm not really into harems, I've only watched one harem anime before in my life, and that was Monster Musume, and the main reason I watched that anime was for the mythical creatures, but I'm interested to see how this goes. And it was smart to use the word Aka for your OC's name, fitting since his last name is Redgrave and he is half demon. And if you don't have an editor, I'd be happy to help.
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KO thanks for your words and I’ll think about your offer.
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When can we expect a new chapter?
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KO pathetic young padawan, the just started, but I promise it’ be soon!
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Ah okay
Not bad. Like the story so far
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KO thanks!
Rebellion is ok but nothing beats Alastor in my book
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I’ve seen 2 red flags so far, 1st over sexualization of the main six for no reason at all and 2nd foreshadowing of a future harem with the main six without previously stated romance or chemistry between characters.
I can’t judge this to harsh tho, because it’s the first chapter.
PD:
cut this harmony stuff out, It’s really off putting when people shove the harmony theme into a character when clearly it has little to no correlation with him/her. Leave the harmony to the ponies, I think the only excuse for bringing a “hero of harmony” is when the hero actually has harmonious powers and a white knight kind of morals.
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Never trust in a Knight in shining armor, because they've never had their mettle tested.