So Twilight is Princess in the time line of this story, does she have her castle and do the CMC have their Cutie Marks too, if so I can think of a few other ponies that would be great to be put on Diamond's control, though she should tell Spoiled and Filthy to act normal when out in public but then their new slut self's in their home.
8682527 Normally I would have probably included more of their antics but the person who requested the second chapter specifically wanted to get to when her father was coming home. I might make another chapter to go in between them at some point in the future.
8713567 Today or tomorrow with any luck. The past couple weeks for me have been utterly swamped with school and work related problems, which gave me very little time to write much of anything. But yeah, sorry for the long wait.
OH, I can't wait to see the next chapter, what pony will Diamond add to her "pleasure" herd then, I just got to know who will she be adding and what other sexual kinks will happen.
8717274 If I can get it done by tonight you'll find out. Currently stuck on a part that has been bugging me for a while now. Hope I can get past it soon.
Well if you ever need idea's or help with a scene just send me a note through the site, I've helped out a few author's on their stories from time to time.
So Twilight is Princess in the time line of this story, does she have her castle and do the CMC have their Cutie Marks too, if so I can think of a few other ponies that would be great to be put on Diamond's control, though she should tell Spoiled and Filthy to act normal when out in public but then their new slut self's in their home.
8682060
You could add a little bit of plot. Like that things start to spiral out of control or at least get more difficult for Diamond.
8682453
I'll be waiting about a week. If I get nothing after that, I'll be taking the reins.
8682492
You're also skipping over a lot of stuff.
8682496
What specifically?
8682505
Like how you skipped the entire week between DT and her mom.
8682527
Normally I would have probably included more of their antics but the person who requested the second chapter specifically wanted to get to when her father was coming home. I might make another chapter to go in between them at some point in the future.
Next chapter out tomorrow. Don't have any time to work on it today, unfortunately.
8695672
It's been a week now, when will the next chapter for the story be up?
8713567
Today or tomorrow with any luck. The past couple weeks for me have been utterly swamped with school and work related problems, which gave me very little time to write much of anything. But yeah, sorry for the long wait.
8713816
OH, I can't wait to see the next chapter, what pony will Diamond add to her "pleasure" herd then, I just got to know who will she be adding and what other sexual kinks will happen.
8717274
If I can get it done by tonight you'll find out. Currently stuck on a part that has been bugging me for a while now. Hope I can get past it soon.
8717322
Well if you ever need idea's or help with a scene just send me a note through the site, I've helped out a few author's on their stories from time to time.
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On final revising stage now. Out in an hour or less.