With the Peace and Harmony of Equestria threatened by the Zebras and the Caribou, Equestrian salvation may lie with the deadliest weapon ever to ride the rails
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I'm not saying it is a comedy. It's just that everything I've heard about this story makes it sound so over-the-top that it can't imagine it not being a comedy.
The T rating should be void considering the explicit chapters in this, it doesnt matter weather or not you censor your swears, sex is still in the story, which means null and voiding the T rating.
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But my point is, it still doesn't seem like you've read the story for yourself! It's all too easy to just judge a book by it's cover. Just read it, at least part of it, and hopefully you'll see what I mean
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Hello AquaticPhoenix,
*sighs*, Yeah, something at the back of my mind kept bothering me about that. It kept telling me to fix it, and I kept saying that I would wait until someone called me on it. Well, I guess that that day is today.
*Picks up pen, pencil, and sharpie* Time to go fix the front page then!
them acting like the power is bad is starting to piss me off so he has power that celestia saw at one point, so what its what he does with them that matters and he's using them to help out his fellow man, power in itself is not bad its the people that use it in a bad way who are bad
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Just didn't want ya to get in trouble from the mods of the site. Rules and all that.
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Hello AquaticPheonix,
And yeah, I don't want to get into trouble either! Thank you again for pointing this out, and I did change the rating.
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Hello forrest yuchnitz,
And I did mention WHY Celestia was worried. As I stated in a previous chapter, Sombra was not always evil. He was once just an ordinary unicorn, until he acquired power that corrupted him so thoroughly, that he ultimately became consumed by it. That kind of raw power didn't scare them enough then, because they could defeat it. When that power returned 1,000 years later, they just defeated it again.
Now, once again, the power has returned, only this time, manifested through a new host. They were scared, because Leopard was heading down the exact same path that Sombra took before him. When Sombra became a part of him, Leopard became Sombra reborn. What's inside of him though, is power that Leopard himself has no idea how to control. The power is that of the darkness, and shadows. Sombra's only teaching him enough to that he can regain his powers, and tear free of Leopard. If that power gets away from Leopard, then it could just find another host to attach to, starting the cycle of corruption all over again.
I won't reveal yet where I'm going with this bit, but it does play a critical role. Leopard is Sombra reborn, and he holds the original Sombra on a tight leash. What happens later down the line, will shape Leopard's future, for the better, or worse.
Also, the reason that Leopard's comrades were so scared, was because they had never seen anything like Leopard was doing. They had all seen some pretty bizarre stuff during the world wars, but never ANYTHING on par with what they were seeing right then!
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your still saying it was the powers fault the power didnt corrupt him he went mad with power but im enjoying this too much even if i have my grievances so ill wait to see what happens
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Kinda-sorta. The exact source of the "Power", will be left up to the audience to decide. Eventually, Leopard may or may not finally learn how to control the power. Sombra never did that, he just let it consume him. And I can say that the next chapter on the Battle of Donneth, will be unlike ANY of the previous battles! So much will happen, and it will be SO action packed!
Leopard: A Human-Bat-Pony hybrid, with 5% wolf thrown in, plus the powers and some of the looks of Sombra. All of that, packaged into a 5'10, 155lb. body!
Also, yes, not in these chapters, but in the first chapter after the war is over, Leopard will FINALLY reveal to Dash what his real name is! Even he himself has long-forgotten his first name, but he still remembers his last name. His last name is What? Did you really think that I would spoil it now?
My guess is "Leopards" real name is Talion (Loyalist points if you get that reference)
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Hello ElderTemplar,
And unfortunately, I don’t get the reference. However, Leopard’s real name is unclear, as even he himself has forgotten his first name. He still remembers his last name though, and reveals it to Rainbow Dash at the end of the story.
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Hello JensenDaniels32,
And yes, this chapter, and the one that follows, were my favorite Leo x Sombra chapters to write so far.
Kriff? Star Wars? What?!
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Fixed them