Not bad, not bad at all. Could have done with more orgasms and less gore, maybe some hint of a sexy EmberXGilda future. Definitely worth a read if you like it rough.

Keep going...

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Well, Ember didn't save her to take her out for tea now did she...

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I plan to ;D
I'm actually considering writing more than the next chapter as I'm starting to enjoy how it's playing out.

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Why thank you!

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I’m not sure why, but that sentence makes me really happy.

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It should make us all very happy
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*sees calvin and hobbes reference*

AYYYYYY I C U

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There are also enormous amounts of references in all of my stories. A lot of them are very discreet and hard to find, so I would be impressed to see if you could ;D