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not okay.

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I haven’t been okay for a while. I was never okay.

Includes depressed Twilight.

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ChaosServant12345

ChaosServant12345 #1 · Dec 9th, 2017 · 2 · ·

Well, poor Twi.

deadpansnarker

deadpansnarker #2 · Dec 9th, 2017 · 4 · ·

I wasn't expecting to like this, but I did. From my moderate experience of the subject, you describe the devastation depression can cause well, and the way you worked in canon events to further nudge Twilight towards the precipice of despair was inspired. Well done.

I have but one question though: you don't mention Starlight's whereabouts at the end. If she's still with Twi, wouldn't she be a good source of comfort for her mentor?

TreeofHarmony

TreeofHarmony #3 · Dec 10th, 2017 · · ·

8599781 Eheehee Starlight's probably practicing magic with Trixie

Or maybe there can be a sequel with Starlight comforting Twi...

Gavier

Gavier #4 · Dec 10th, 2017 · 1 · ·

This is sad, good sad in a way, artistic sad.
Like the sadness of the romantic artists.

I don't want to disrespect those who suffer depression, I have a friend struggling with it and I can say, It's awful. I want to help, but how do you help someone to stop fearing herself? How can you be there for a person that goes away, because she doesn't want to be an inconvinience?

But... even in the horrible things there can be beauty, and, even when I know that princess Booky is not real, the empathy is real.

Thank you for writing this.