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MallaJong 51118

Joined July 2012
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    MallaJong's Stories (5)

    • Spike's Rainbow Dash
      Spike and Rainbow Dash take part in a game of love.

      34,460 words · 14,010 views · 1,473 likes · 38 dislikes
    • Spike's Daring Do
      Spike and Daring Do go on an adventure! Rainbow Dash reads the adventure!
      1,069 words · 3,670 views · 329 likes · 5 dislikes
    • Spike's Luna
      Spike meets Luna at the Grand Galloping Gala.
      10,295 words · 8,606 views · 728 likes · 22 dislikes
    • And The Bell Tolls Twice
      Soarin' and Spike are best friends. Spike partakes in a frivolous dare: randomly "ask a mare out".
      4,557 words · 915 views · 53 likes · 2 dislikes
    • Pinkie Pie Parties with a Frat House
      3,034 words · 1,021 views · 34 likes · 3 dislikes

    Pinkie Pie materializes in front of three fraternity brothers of one of the most party-hard Greek Fraternities in the nation. What happens when Pinkie Pie finally parties with actual party animals? Inspired by SimGretina's At The Gala (20% Cooler Remix) I wrote this story in one sitting on my cellular device. Many adjectives are repeated. This is because I just did not care about how the story was written, as long as the story was executed.

    First Published
    20th Jul 2012
    Last Modified
    4th Aug 2012

    Comments ( 20 )

    #2 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    You know, story execution is all well and good, but you shouldn't sacrifice quality. A great story poorly told is simply a poor story.

    #3 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    HAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS FUNNY AS ALL HELL!!!!!!!!!!!:rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

    #4 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Pinkie parties with frat boys. I like this.

    Aru
    #5 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I like this dude who shout randomly "I'll show you sex baby!" :pinkiehappy:

    #6 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Sees title. Must read.

    #7 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I read it. It was funny.

    #8 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    "Oh, shit, we killed it!" :rainbowlaugh:

    #9 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    My face is actually red from laughing so much. It was pretty funny. :rainbowlaugh: When she took it all in at once, I knew all hell would be released. A single drop of something like that would surely set off Pinkie, and I'm surprised the world didn't blow up with all of that in her system.

    I do wish we got to know how the heck she got there, unless I totally missed that somewhere. And the writing was decent. Could have been better, but I won't say anything considering what you wrote in the description. If only Pinkie were ever at a party I went to. She'd make it a million times cooler. :rainbowdetermined2:

    #10 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    at first I was like: :rainbowlaugh:

    and now I'm like: :rainbowlaugh:

    hilarious.

    #11 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    This was a fun idea. However, the actual writing is really hard to follow at times.

    #12 · 47w, 4d ago · · ·
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    I'll show you sex, baby!!!!!

    #13 · 47w, 58m ago · · ·
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    This was beautiful. It really was.

    #14 · 41w, 6d ago · · ·
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    >>943871 It's a frat party. This story was written as if it was written at a frat party. IT'S PERFECT!!! :pinkiecrazy:

    #15 · 40w, 4d ago · · ·
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    Hey! Someone in the front of the pic stole Pinkie's hat and repainted it!:pinkiegasp:

    #17 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    I wasn't initially going to check this out, but then i saw this line: Inspired by SimGretina's At The Gala (20% Cooler Remix)

    And being obsessed with the brony music community as I am, I had to check this out.

    This pic sums up my thoughts on this story:

    But in a good way. You never fail to impress Malla, you never fail to impress.

    #18 · 39w, 6d ago · · ·
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    Seriously though, I was laughing my ass off the entire time I read this :rainbowlaugh:

    #19 · 35w, 5d ago · · ·
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    Why didn't they rape the living fuck out of that bitch?

    #20 · 23w, 5d ago · · ·
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    OMG I watched Hangover part 1 and 2 for the first time then I found this story like 20mins later lol PARTY FUCKIN HARD!!! :flutterrage:

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