Pinkie Pie materializes in front of three fraternity brothers of one of the most party-hard Greek Fraternities in the nation. What happens when Pinkie Pie finally parties with actual party animals? Inspired by SimGretina's At The Gala (20% Cooler Remix) I wrote this story in one sitting on my cellular device. Many adjectives are repeated. This is because I just did not care about how the story was written, as long as the story was executed.
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You know, story execution is all well and good, but you shouldn't sacrifice quality. A great story poorly told is simply a poor story.
My face is actually red from laughing so much. It was pretty funny.
When she took it all in at once, I knew all hell would be released. A single drop of something like that would surely set off Pinkie, and I'm surprised the world didn't blow up with all of that in her system.
I do wish we got to know how the heck she got there, unless I totally missed that somewhere. And the writing was decent. Could have been better, but I won't say anything considering what you wrote in the description. If only Pinkie were ever at a party I went to. She'd make it a million times cooler. ![]()
This was a fun idea. However, the actual writing is really hard to follow at times.
I wasn't initially going to check this out, but then i saw this line: Inspired by SimGretina's At The Gala (20% Cooler Remix)
And being obsessed with the brony music community as I am, I had to check this out.
This pic sums up my thoughts on this story:
But in a good way. You never fail to impress Malla, you never fail to impress.
Seriously though, I was laughing my ass off the entire time I read this ![]()
OMG I watched Hangover part 1 and 2 for the first time then I found this story like 20mins later lol PARTY FUCKIN HARD!!! ![]()







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