I would have given you my opinions sooner if I knew you were going to upload it tonight.
I felt like this was meant to be a teaser to something that could have been longer-bigger, but it was still ok.

Actually, I'm thinking about making another chapter. If I do, you'll see soon.
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It's been quite a long time since I've seen a good story with Night Light and Twilight Velvet. Is it so fucking hard for people to make stories with these two? That doesn't involve an infidelity?

Nice work.

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Thanks for the much needed props, yo!