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I commented because that was the most fucked thing I ever read. I think you're a competent writer. But fucknut on a shitnado, I really hope this doesn't go that way. Before I go in, there's not going to be any diaper/piss/regression fetish in this, right?

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No, there is not. All the fetishes are clearly marked at the top of the story. If you don't like what is included, then don't read.

eh, not bad. not bad at all.

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Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

This was a fun read, I ca understand why someone would be willing to go through BDMS only to cut it short because of panic, going to the police would be very much stretching it unless they don't have anyone else to turn to and doesn't know on how to process what had happened to her, but learning that it wasn't the first time that happened is sign that she was looking to get all the attention and sympathy she could get her way by playing the victim there. I have encounter some people like but can I wouldn't understand why she they would go out of their way to destroy a guy's life and carrier like that.

It sounds more like she was counting on the guy being silence out of shame and guilt and wasn't expecting his other friends to jump in and testify on his behalf while exposing themselves to the public's law's harsh criticism. My best guess it was a way to try in exerting power over others by ruining their fun for everyone out of misdirected rage and impudence over in their desperate need to feed their egos like that.

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You mean Stargazer? She was a cry wolf serial 'victim'. Luckily she was found out and punished accordingly.

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Oh, what was her punishment then for lying to the police and justice like that?

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honestly I don't know. I made it clear she was punished for it. most likely it was a jail term.

i like the story keep up the great work and dont listen to others who cares what they complain abot its ur story u write what u want and take their critizam like a grain of salt brush it off ur shoulder

I love it when you can get into a characters head space while reading it. Thank you for this one,

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You're both very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed the story

Decent story,I like it when the sub already knows the pleasure instead of trying to find something enjoyable during the session or imagine the feelings they might feel because they’re new to BDSM. Also the dialogue is quite interesting as well

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Thank you! I find that 'finding the pleasure' in a session is usually in those stories where the sub is abused and they learn to like it. I like to write a sub who is fully in control and knows what he / she likes.