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Princess Celestia sends Twilight and the gang to learn a little about love after The Grand Galloping Gala. She sends them to her childhood summer home. A friend of the Princess hosts the Mane Six and Spike for the summer. Mild Sexual Content ...PG-13 yall! Flutterdash is endgame! Rarity and Applejack play matchmaker.... Spike/OC/Rarity love triangle. Twilight/OC and Fluttershy cuteness!

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 21 )

between Rarity,Twilight and Fluttershy

And here I was hoping Spike got some love any love

"Nothing too mature just fluff really between Rarity,Twilight and Fluttershy and my OCs."

Aww goddamit.

BABY DRAGON?! DUDE CAN DESTORY A WHOLE CITY!

If anything dude can be considered a teen now

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Spike is in a love Triangle between Rarity and Amazon!
I'm planning to have him act very jealous which I think will be adorable!

936430 oh will that does sound sweet i just hope dude does not get his heart destoryed I feel for the kid every one has a favorite pony mines Spike so sorry if im a bit defensive for the dude

936444
I understand completely! I wrote this story because I felt awful for Rarity at the Gala. What kind of prince makes a mare pay for him!
I also want to see Fluttershy get a love interest so here we are lol!:twilightsmile:

936537 I now I was like really blueblood you're a rich prince stop being an ass

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Well there might be some make out scenes..:raritywink:

936817 I think you're misunderstanding me. This story sounded promising until you mentioned OC ships.

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Well I apologize for getting your hopes up...I do appreciate the feedback though...

Am...

Am I seeing something wrong here, or does this chapter have all of zero words in it?

1518101 Well I'm updating right now though lol! Sorry about that!

It is really short dude and I think you should do more of "show me don't tell me" I feels like I am being spoon feed a story add some sauce. I am also not much of a writer so take my advice with a gain of salt.

1536070 That's actually really good feedback dude! Thanx a bunch man!

1536245 don't worry about it.

Don't use a name to much like spike this spike that. Try something like Spike walked down the stone road his heart cold as if a winter frost found its way in removing the very thing that gave him life or meaning.

It was nice. funny but being drunk always is.

I don't know why are there so many dislikes for the story, I know, OC Shipping, but I'm cool with it :) Since you have implanted Flutterdash XD :raritywink:

1891468 Thank you so much! I have a sequel I'm currently working on that I just posted on Christmas! Check it out!

rainbow is not a stallion! She's just a tomboyish mare!

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