She-Demon Sunset was close to victory of defeating Twilight and her friends, but one Sentry stood in her way unleashing some demonic beat-down. Thought that's the start of this devilish adventure.
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nice work.
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KO thanks!
Uuhhhhhh.....Hrm. Well, I want to read the story. But the way the description is written just kinda....
Okay, yeah, I'll admit that I've never touched "good" stories simply because the grammar and/or spelling irks me. Grammar Nazi and all that. I'll read this later, don't get me wrong, but for now this is something that I have to work myself up to read. And it's a shame, because I love both franchises. So if this is done well, it's gold. But that summary is almost always make-or-break for me.
In the worlds of the esteemed Samuel L Jackson:
"ENGLISH MOTHERFUCKER, DO YOU WRITE IT?!"
Seriously though, just from the first chapter alone you need extensive proofreading.
It is probably because she was possessed, that probably had side effects.
Called it.