Spike planned to be an archaeologist, not a xenobiologist. An ancient dig changes things, and he's in for the ride of his life...in more ways than one.
This is a great story. I loved it, and it kept me interested the entire time. You earn 40 points for not doing the far over done generic freak out scene. Great job for leaving it out.
Now he has to get on a train, full of nudist ponies, and meet the leaders of the new world he finds himself in. Which is going to happen more? Ponies panicking or looking at him lustfully?
Every once and a while there are a few grammatical errors but the story is solid. If you want to give the main character some neat abilities (if you decide to make them necessary) at least balance how strong he is, lots of HiE stores dont dont balance their character when giving the MC powers. Otherwise this story is alright so far, keep it up.
Huh. So we have human Spike (yes, it’s the same Spike seeing as his hair has been described to be spiky and green with purple highlights) coming to Anthro Equestria, where he meets the Mane 6, Trixie, Tempest, who we can assume to be Starlight Glimmer and Moondancer, the anthro female version of his Equestrian counterpart, Barb, and a few more. Looking forward to more.
It took a good bit of his willpower not to stare at her backside as she did. 'Keep it together, man. This is neither the time or place to oogle. Hell, I'm still due for a freakout! I'm an alien on a planet with small, anthro pony girls! Granted, they are pretty damn cute, but still!' Fortunately for him, his attention was grabbed by the three smallest mares; the gamboge pegasus with cerise mane, a light grey unicorn with a grey rose and mulberry mane, and a light greyish olive earth pony with an amaranth mane as they almost bounded up to him.
Dude can you just say, an orange pegasus with a purple mane? Or a beige earth pony with a pink mane? This is a fanfiction not a Harvard essay, you don't gotta flex on us with "amaranth" or "gamboge".
Looks like Rarity and Barb are intended INA three way and are a couple, and now we meet almost everyone just Starlight and Moondancer left and now we are going to meet Tia and hopefully Luna.
He going to see princess Big tits
Woo! It's here!
This is a great story. I loved it, and it kept me interested the entire time. You earn 40 points for not doing the far over done generic freak out scene. Great job for leaving it out.
I look forward to seeing more from this Author.
The Monk
Fav and Tracking!!!
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Gleaming Shield
Haven't read yet but:
anthropomorphic
Now he has to get on a train, full of nudist ponies, and meet the leaders of the new world he finds himself in. Which is going to happen more? Ponies panicking or looking at him lustfully?
here's to hoping we don't get hyper inflated princesses
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nah, I like buxom, but the hyper stuff isn't my thing.
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I am always for proportion if things are too big it goes from sexy to odd. Cool to know it won't be boobs as big as someone's torso .
Every once and a while there are a few grammatical errors but the story is solid. If you want to give the main character some neat abilities (if you decide to make them necessary) at least balance how strong he is, lots of HiE stores dont dont balance their character when giving the MC powers.
Otherwise this story is alright so far, keep it up.
All my yes
So totally not Spike from Earth who just happens to be named Spike meets our ponies as sexy little Shortstacks?
alright, im in
Bet you 10,000 bits he pops a boner in front of Celestia and Luna.
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Bet 100,000 bits they take it as a compliment.
You gonna be making fun of Celestia's famous cakebutt when Spike meets her?
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cakebutt?
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A fandom trait given to Celestia is a big butt from her love of cakes.
Interesting! Please continue.
Very interesting story, can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapter
So, when is this being updated?
Huh. So we have human Spike (yes, it’s the same Spike seeing as his hair has been described to be spiky and green with purple highlights) coming to Anthro Equestria, where he meets the Mane 6, Trixie, Tempest, who we can assume to be Starlight Glimmer and Moondancer, the anthro female version of his Equestrian counterpart, Barb, and a few more. Looking forward to more.
I like how this story is progressing. Keep up the good work dude.
Dude can you just say, an orange pegasus with a purple mane? Or a beige earth pony with a pink mane? This is a fanfiction not a Harvard essay, you don't gotta flex on us with "amaranth" or "gamboge".
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Dude, I'm just using the wiki.
Looks like Rarity and Barb are intended INA three way and are a couple, and now we meet almost everyone just Starlight and Moondancer left and now we are going to meet Tia and hopefully Luna.