Hi everyone my name is Daniel and I am a huge Pokemon fan and mlp fan so when I was on fimfiction and looking what was new I found another user was randomizing people to see what three Pokemon they got and could use it for what ever so I did it I just didn't think it would send me to equestria and running away from twilight all the time
Pokemon DNA Injection and story idea is by: DisplacedWriter thank u for the randomize
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I'm happy that my idea has sparked up your story. ^^ Although, you were suppose look a hybrid of the three pokemon, but hey, that's your choice.
aaawww i feel bad for the guy but I'm gonna feel worse when he get's to twilight
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Don't worry the twilight freak out is not coming to soon he will have time to prepare himself
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aawww but i wanna see the cringe
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Well I'll think on it how about that still coming with ideas lol
I’ll give my opinion after about five chapters
Alright then my friend already working on chapter two and and I hope I get a good opinion from u
Good work and good luck moving
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Thanks man or girl on both things and its funny like we just got the beds sit up so we could sleep lol
I left a red thumb on this..."story".
You need a proofreader and/or editor.😒
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I guarantee that getting one will increase your ratings. Grammar Its legitimately the only reason I'm not going to continue to read this story.
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Here's a suggestion for a title:
"My Life As An Equestrian Pokémon"
It's not too different from this fanfic's current title but it sounds better in my opinion.
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Thank u for the name subjection I'll think about butting that as the name
Incredible! Liked and followed.
Might wanna fix up the grammar and spelling in the description, though.
Fixed the short description for you. Change
Getting ymy DNA mixed with three different Pokemon DNA was not what I had in mind when I did that pokemon randomizer
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Getting my DNA mixed with the DNA of three different Pokemon was definitely not what I had in mind when I tried that pokemon randomizer!
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Thanks
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What three Pokemon are going to be involved in the Randomizer?
Also, you're really supposed to use pictures as supplementary things. You know, bonus stuff, after you describe the characters using text.
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To be really honest with u Sliverstar I have been so busy that I can't remember except for the one that I'm using in the first chapter and I was going to start over or let u the readers decided on what the other two Pokemon DNA would be
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Stunfisk, Dunsparce, and Cascoon.
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Alright man I'll keep that in mind but I'm going to do like a chapter asking people what their three Pokemon are and I'm going to pick witch one has the most like so voting really if that makes since
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Voting's a good idea.
hey man i was just wondering when the next chapter was going to be released?
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I don't really know I was typing everything on my computer but its pretty hard doing it with my phone what i'm using right now and even this is starting to act up but I'll try and type the next chapter with this old phone and thank u for the fav I really appreciate it
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no prob man and you have a good thing going here. but here's a little tip between us writer's just go to the public library nearest to you and use the computers there.
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Yeah that is true but the library for me is like all the way cross town and I have no ride to get their like by the time I get their it would be close to closing time and we can only use the computers for two hrs a day
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Well ain't that a buzz kill, then why not do summer jobs and save up the cash to buy a used one.
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Yeah that's what I been doing got a job interview on the 16th this month
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Good luck man I wish you all the best.
Hope you restart work on this.
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The idea isn't new the way you're presenting it is interesting but your grammar is God-awful I mean that in the best way but you need a proofreader or an editor to fix most of the 100 plus errors you have managed to stuff in these 3 chapters
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I know but i have never been that good at writing and i write on here for fun and to try to get better. I use to have someone that i did stories with but he not here anymore so yeaa
Also thanks for the feed back negative or positive
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well you will never get better if you don't try. I'm write my own story just keep trying and maybe later. We could do a crossover if your up to that.
OK the crying part actually Mads me laugh