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Hidden Secret


I write low quality fan fiction stuff.

Comments ( 22 )

What's Marble going to do when Maud moves to Ponyville?

You sure like the word 'tits' huh?

Otherwise, not too shabby. Try to make the orgasm a little more sexy, rather than a shoddy two sentence definition. Otherwise, keep up the good work.

-Yogi

It wasn't awful. The plot -hehe- was a little lacking, and some scenes were meh, but overall I'd say this is a win for a first story. Keep up work like this and you'll be a star... Or something, I don't fucking know.

Viel Gluek, and whatnot,
Yogi

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Prolly fuck Lime. It'd prolly be consensual too, knowing Lime.

this story is awesome, I hope it will continue soon :)

do more

This is Awesome please make more of this. Sleep Rape is in real life bad. But fiction wise it is awesome.

hope 2 see an update soon

Comment posted by saljay deleted Apr 11th, 2020

She promised herself though that if Maud didn’t find out that morning, she wouldn’t do it ever again.

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Marble was determined to fuck Maud’s womb every night after this, if it’s a safe day only… right?

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Needs moar.

hey a comment in 2019! i say update

I love this so much, pls update :3

This was a interesting beginning can't wait to see where this goes.

This is getting more and more interesting I'm officially hooked.

The time is coming to impregnet.

This was a awesome and fun chapter.

This was a awesome and fun story.

I hope ya make sequels to this that involve her going after her sister's and mother.

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