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Randy11201


Don't mind me, I'm just a bring who likes military stuff

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Craig Allison is a 16yr old junior from CHS who was drafted into the marine corp after a mistake. Now, along with other recruits from all over the country, he will be send and train for 10 weeks in Parris island before he could finally becoming a marine.

This is my first story so please don't judge too much and feel free to point out any mistakes that you found and give me some ideas for the next story, thank you.

*contains swearing words

*set after the events of Rainbow Rocks

PS. Main characters will make a brief appearence during the last chapter.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 11 )
Comment posted by Randy11201 deleted Aug 24th, 2017

Uh... boot camp is 13 weeks, bro.

I write it 10 weeks because the story it's set during wartime

you need an editor/proofreader... good story, good premise, but a good bit of errors. That being said...

not bad for your first fic :)

But the question is how to get an editor

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top of the page, you should see an envelope with a red box above it with a number in it, the is the PM system

What should I do next

What should I send in the message

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