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TheWingman


I'm the resident Hideaki Anno of FimFiction. I like to write whatever I think of. Sometimes good or sometimes s**t, I just love writing.

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Time for bed. :ajsleepy:
Sees sequel to A Cinch to Feel Lust*
I guess sleep can wait :pinkiecrazy:

Reads it*

As Cinch took a hearty sip of her wine she was startled by the presence of something small and metallic. She took another sip to see the object more clearly. She digs it out of her glass to reveal something that shook her: a diamond ring. She was confused as to why it was in her drink until she saw Timber next to her on one knee. It was then and there that she knew what the whole thing was all about.

"Will you... Abacus Cinch... marry me and be my wife?" She was unresponsive at first but as she snapped out of her shock. She started to tear up in extreme joy as she had never had been popped the question. She always wanted to be a wife nd her dreams were finally coming true.

"YES! YES! A MILLION TIMES YES!!!" She cries as she rushes to Timber and traps him in an embracing prison of kisses and unbridled love.

Begins a "Yes" chant*

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. The best has yet to come. I wrote the first chapter within 6 hours and I still have plenty of ideas and a clear direction to take this story. Thank you for getting me to consider this idea. :twilightsmile:

Question what happen to Blue Blood did he finally cross the line with someone else or he still causing trouble?
also will eh run into any of the others from hsi old school CHS?

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That is still being written. His fate will be revealed in the end of Face Off! and another one I'm developing.

Timber looked out the window, breathing in the fresh, crisp spring air. It felt relaxing, soothing and reinvigorating to feel it pass through his lungs. The sun had shone it's radiant light down upon the landscape on an amazing sunny day. As Timber park his car, I reflected on how life had been for him since he had graduated from Crystal Prep 4 years ago: A managerial job at a plant his uncle owned, moved out of his house and lives on his own finances, and best of all... he shares it the one woman he loves, Abacus Cinch. His heart beats like military drums from just thinking about her and all of the nights of love they shared.

"Timber, you really hit the jackpot." Timber contemplated as he walks into Cinch's house where he sees Cinch in all her beauty, watching the news.

As Timber park his car, I reflected - As Timber parked his car - he reflected.
Crystal Prep 4 years ago - Crystal Prep four years ago.
moved out of his house and lives on his own - moved out of his house and living on his own.
of all... he shares it the one woman he loves - of all...he shared it with the one woman he loved.
contemplated as he walks into Cinch's - contemplated as he walked into Cinch's.
where he sees Cinch - where he saw Cinch.

Interesting idea and concept, I just couldn't get past the second paragraph with the POV change and the tense disagreements.

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sorry about that. I'll improve upon that. :twilightsmile: If you can help with proofreading, I'll gladly credit you in the description.

So when are you putting up the next chapter?

Still mixing past and present tense.

Awesome chapter. :pinkiehappy:

Timber woke up the next morning to find that he was still in the same position as he was when he fell asleep. The one thing he did notice was that Abacus Cinch was absent from his embrace. He got up and looked around in a waking gaze as he tried to find out where his wife was.

*Huuurrrkk!*

The noise alerted him to the nearby bathroom. He rushed there to find his wife huddling over the toilet puking.

*Huuurrrkk!*

"Honey, are you alright?" Timber said as Abacus Cinch turned her sickened gaze towards him.

"I'm fin-*Bleeegghhh!*" Timber wasn't convinced by his wife's reassurances as he had the feeling that something else was at work.

"How long has this been going on?" Timber said as he put his arm on Abacus Cinch's back, rubbing it. Abacus knew that she would have to tell him sooner or later and decided to tell him.

"The past three days... every morning."

"Get your stuff on. We're going to urgent care."

I think will soon hear the pitter patter of little feet soon :rainbowkiss:

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Probably the last, at least until I can figure out some good ideas. But, that's not a definite yes or no to the question so play it by ear. I'm writing a draft for a horror fic based on '28 Days Later'. I have a feeling it'll be chilling.

8378749 that's cool. I have two awesome fic to tide me over until then :derpytongue2:

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Thank you. I do plan on a third and final installment to the trilogy, but the tone will be the opposite of this and unexpected.

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No, I've long since cancelled it but some of the ideas made it into The Cinch Chronicles. TBH, I intended this as the only sequel. I do apologize

Didn;t see the fic, but I notice you had a picture of mine I comisisoned, Hope you liked the full version too!

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