Her fur is as white as the clouds, and just as fluffy, while her mane, which is black but slower fades to cyan, is slicked back down her neck.
Slowly fades to cyan? Otherwise it sounds weird to me.
About her neck, a pair of half moon spectacles dangle from a beaded retainer.
This one too. Is 'about her neck' a proper phrase? I'm not trying to be sarcastic or sassy or anything I honestly don't know. It just sounds weird to me. Is it suppose to be 'around her neck' or is 'about' a proper phrase?
Enjoying the story BTW. It's just, I tend to end up subconsciously spell checking stories I enjoy. Sorry.
or a small orange-and-blue gel packet that looked oddly tasty
Hmm... I wonder.
Another delicious chapter well done, hehehe, reminds me of the time I got my hair died... that didn't end very well all of my hair fell out! But this was a nice piece of work, good show!
It hadn’t looked like the stuff your dad used to make sure his uniform dress shirts were nice and white. Instead of being liquidy—or a small orange-and-blue gel packet that looked oddly tasty—the bleach in the tub appeared to be some form of paste.
“Goodbye, darlings!” Plume calls after you. She gives you a wink when you glance back. “And enjoy the rest of your day, young one. It’ll be memorable, that’s for sure.”
Interesting... I wonder how the added colors tie into this version of Pegasus society?
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Slowly fades to cyan? Otherwise it sounds weird to me.
This one too. Is 'about her neck' a proper phrase? I'm not trying to be sarcastic or sassy or anything I honestly don't know. It just sounds weird to me. Is it suppose to be 'around her neck' or is 'about' a proper phrase?
Enjoying the story BTW. It's just, I tend to end up subconsciously spell checking stories I enjoy. Sorry.
Keep it coming I always get so exited when I see you've added a chapter
You told me not to worry, but I was right to be worried.
Hmm... I wonder.
Another delicious chapter well done, hehehe, reminds me of the time I got my hair died... that didn't end very well all of my hair fell out! But this was a nice piece of work, good show!
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I believe so, I know I've seen the word 'about' be used in place of the word 'across'.
I'm not sure how proper it is to do so, though.
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Birds have flashy colours to attract mates. I could easily see it being for that reason.
i wanna see fanart of this colt, with kinda a before and after.
i bet he'd look good.
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Huh. Well it still sounds a bit weird to me, but well this isn't my story. *shrugs*
This chapter enjoyed with booze
Oooh hes gonna get windy's pussy isnt he...
The salons name is only second to 'curl up and dye' from a certain movie
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Ever hear of the wild and wonderful world of avian mating displays?
Kid's done up like a sailor hitting port....
Nononononono...we already have seen this on Featured, and it wasn't pretty. I'm not lye-n.
She's having nuts for dinner.
Do I smell more food porn incoming?!
Please let there be more food porn ❤️
Tide pods mmmmmmm...
"a small orange-and-blue gel packet that looked oddly tasty" ~~~~~~ WHY the tide pods
tide pod challenge confirmed
Love the fluffy. Be one with the fluffy.
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The question is what kind of Liquor helped edit it my friend!🍻🍷🍾We talking strong or mild?