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AlligatorStich


Welcome to my machine of shameless writing.

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hay thought gleam was a girl

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Gleam is a girl. She is biologically a male though. Transexual to be exact.

Comment posted by jackfangs3 deleted Oct 14th, 2017

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well I ask cause you referred to her as she for most of the story then the last bit of the sex scene you called her he a lot

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That was because she was missing her skirt and felt like a male. It is quite confusing, though I plan to touch bases on it pretty heavy in the next few chapters.

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The idea is that the skirt is the defining aspect of her gender, which I have planned to change in her character later on.

Comment posted by AlligatorStich deleted Oct 14th, 2017

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oh that makes since

Certainly an interesting start, but a good one nonetheless.

Do you need an editor though? I saw a few spelling errors here and there.

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I do not actually have an editor at the moment. If you are interested, send me a message. I would be more than happy to have someone look over it--along with future stories.

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