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TheWingman
I'm the resident Hideaki Anno of FimFiction. I like to write whatever I think of. Sometimes good or sometimes s**t, I just love writing.
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... a Wolfenstein reference? Awesome!
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Yeah, it's one of my favorite games. I really enjoyed Brian Bloom's performance as our favorite nazi killing badass. That game became one of the inspirations for me to write stories like Alive, Not Alive. Can't wait for The New Colossus.
Well, this fiction was rather exaggerative in a few places. The office scene was more lustful rather passionate in its entirety, as Celestia's first reaction Acre admitting is sex in her office. The dialogue makes the romance between the two sound like something a king and Queen would say, and this is happening between the principal and her student. Now, the ending twist of Celestia birthing Acre's child is actually fantastic, and the fact that he found out five years later makes it better; and the prom bit was also rather nice. But the love between the two makes it sound like that they assured strong eternal love after only really spending a few days romantically. As for the noice bits, a teenage male has a maximum of two to three rounds in his clip that can go off if there's enough charge, with a reload time of five to twelve hours. This kid sounds like he could give a minigun a run for its money from his rate-of-fire.
All in all, I enjoyed reading this and it holds a concept that I've been thinking of using. It was good!
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and another one with sunset shimmer (Actually teased a scene of that story in another of my stories, Face Off!).
Thank you for the critique. It was my first time writing a clopfic and not the last. I tend to focus on the emotional development side of romances to add more meaning to the relationship between the parties involved. It's basically me dipping my toes in these waters, so to say. I do have 2 more in the works: one involving
As for Acre "Lasting" when doing the horizontal hokey-pokey with Celestia, It can be interpreted that Acre is a virgin, but that might be me rushing those scenes a bit which I regret doing. But, I'll learn from this experience.
All in all, Thank you and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
(P.S.: Be on the lookout for another story after Face Off! is finished. It's going to be a survival horror oriented story.)
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If your a wolfenstein fan then you'll probably like this
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Oh man, I watched that before. That was pure fire of awesomeness. I'm on my 9th playthrough of that game since a long time.
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'nuff said.
I haven't played the games, but I hope 2 soon before The new Colossus, the atmosphere makes me think of the games are like Call of Duty and Doom mixed together.
It also has one other subject they can probably relate with each other, Demon Nazi ZOMBIES
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And if you've seen JT Machinima I bet you'll like this video
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Also here's my favorite song from JT Machinima
Why? I don't need a reason why
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Great story
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Thank you. I was at first had reservations towards writing clopfics. But after the reception I had from them, I'll keep writing them as long as I have ideas for some.
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Interesting, that's great to hear
Well I wish you good luck and to have fun in writing your future stories
YOU FUCKING MORON! TF YOU SAY THAT FOR YOU IDIOT!? YES, IT IS IMPORTANT, TO TELL THE TRUTH, BUT YOU SHOULD CALM THE FUCK DOWN AND SAY IT LIKE A MAN NOT A NERVES WRECK!!!
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Consider this story antiquated, meaning it's old and doesn't matter to me anymore. I usually write better stuff than this or at least try, lol.