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great update i wonder what trixie said to dash?
Well. I have to say that went pretty well!
Also looking forward to Twilight's "apology!"
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Would work quite well, I think. She's full of tricks, and he'd probably find that quite "Wonderful! Marvelous!"
"If we all threw our problems in a pile and saw everyone else's, we'd grab ours back." - Regina Brett
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Good show, Unahim. It's kind of funny, really, picturing Dash almost wishing for self-flagellation, holed up on her house and schlicking feverishly until she passes out while calling herself a bad pony. xD
1035505 Oh you know....... Think of how they got her to start think about how she is a fillyfooler in the first place.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Fluttershy_umad.png
One thing that stood out to me as not quite fitting is Trixie calling Dash "Dashy" in this line: “But Dashy, is that really so bad? What are you afraid of?”
Just doesn't seem like a term Trixie would use easily and definitely not in that situation. She barely knows Dash, even considering that one night. On top of that, she's in a situation where she cannot be sure of the outcome, dealing with a Dash that is emotionally distraught. The use of that term could have easily caused Dash to blow up. And also worth noting that even amongst the mane 6, only one refers to Dash that way, so not exactly the standard nickname used for her.
The number of cliffhangers is to damn high
wait, so Trixie essentially said that Twilight and her are now exclusive... then gives Dash an invitation to have sex with Twilight. The fuck...
Neobrony, I doubt the author would go about doing that, it would become rather monotinous and repetative, not to mention it'd make the story basically "loop". No, I think that Twi is gonna get what she deserves and maybe Dash will finally get a chance to curb the lust cravings that she has.
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If you read between some of the lines, you see that it's a lot more playful this time. In the bath, for instance.
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I think you may be over-analyzing this a bit, which I admit we're good at as a community, anyway ^^ Trixie wouldn't know what the "standard" way of dealing with Dash is, and she was trying to be salving and somewhat soothing in that part.
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No, no, no, she said she didn't want to do anything without Twilight there as well. In Trixie's own words "That’s different. She was there". When she's there, even if she doesn't join in, it becomes a shared experience. If she were to sex up Dash while Twilight wasn't even aware of it, it would definitely be cheating.
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If you click the little chat button to the right of a post, they'll get a message that you replied to them ^^
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So far, so good!
1034086 Indeed there is.
Damn...Dash is horny.
nice chapter. good how you explained everything !
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Ah, so threesome's makes everything better... I think I can accept that
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I knew what that button did but I was convinced it was a thumbtack.
I had a feeling you would end the story for 3 chapters before this, but still, i don't comply. The reson for the feelings are that after an open ending you did in trixis revelianse. That answer lot of questions and let a hole you could use later as a skvill. Sorry for my English. Well, can't wait to read the lastest of chapters in this story.
1035732 Get what she deserves? Like what, a good clit licking?
Love it.
For some reason I can already feel the next shitstorm a-brewin.
And I'm not referring to anything in the immediate future. I just somehow know there is going to be an unexpected twist.
1035905 Possibly, or be the one commanded to lick someone elses...
Ooooohhhh I can see immense TwiDash clop on the horizon.
Can't wait for it.
twilight is screwed keep it up
1035505 Dash has urges + Trixie commands Twilight for an entire day + Trixie wants to help Dash = ?
-Glassed
Looks like the next update will be two chapters.
I really loved how Trixie's apology and chat with Dashy went. I hope that next apology goes as smoothly.
Wow Trixie is NICE now
Its nice she is Caring but her cunning might get her in big problems
This outa be good
aw But I want Rainbow dashTrixie and Twilight
Menage hehe
<--- what i did most of the chapter
1035665 "the rent is too damn high"
I sense a double chapter coming up.
Poor, poor Twilight, you won't walk comfortable for a while. And what about all those hickeys on your plot?
Twiiiilight's gonnna geeeeetttt it!
Horny Dash is best Dash! Wait...
Another good chapter, why can't my story be this awesome?
Dashie & Trixie: FEEL THE FORCE!!!
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Verily my friend! Thou art exceptional at thine writings. HUZAH!
Resolution! I LOVE IT.
Wait, weren't you wanting some kind of conflict between me and Rainbow?
Now? Well, now I'm just expecting some fun. I thought Rainbow would be a cyan-colored enraged bomb ready to go off, but all she's been doing is fighting with herself.
Anypony would fight with themselves after that.
True, true. I'd probably commit suicide or drown my brain in battery acid but this isn't about me, and thank God it isn't...
Thank Celestia indeed...I'd have to follow you on your path to the grave if I saw that happening.
So, where do we go now? I expect a bit of 'fun' between Rainbow and Twilight, then some days with Trixie and Twilight resolving things with the denizens of Ponyville...then...well, I suppose a sequel is in order.
Everything gets resolved, and we're left with a wholly complete, re-readable novel.
You guys should've shown me this earlier; I'd've finished up my Daring Do book sooner!
Why interrupt your favorite series though, Dash?
Yeah, true. Work and practice takes up most of my time anyway.
Anyway, review time! What's there to say? As usual, the imagery and characterization is spot on, the situations were believable and enjoyable, and the internal fight with Rainbow was fully explained in a simple dialogue with shockingly high speed. I don't feel any worse for it; you took it at the perfect pace, didn't over-explain it, yet I wasn't left asking "Why did she think that?". Overall, another excellent chapter for this excellent story.
And now that that's done, who's up for some tea and cupcakes over at the library?
Sure, I'm in. Done with reading for the moment anyway.
Sure! Is it Pinkie's special recipe again?
Ohhhh, I hope not...I can't handle her Chilicakes. My poor stomach suffers with every bite, and my mouth feels like the Fourth Circle of Hell.
Nah, don't worry! These ones are ice-cream based! Took a lot of work to get it right!
Ice-cream based? Now I've GOTTA try those!
Yeh, sure, Ah'm in. Wouldn't miss it for the world.
Ohhh, why not?
Alright then everypony, let's head out!
Hey Twi, did you get that new comic series in?
Yeah, your special order came in. Sitting on the center table in the library.
Right on. Alright then, Deadpool, you and me got a date tonight...
*The reading group heads out through the front door of Steel's house, and out into a single street stretching off a short distance before meeting the edge of Ponyville.*
You know, I keep forgetting to ask; why do you live on the edge of town? Why not move in?
I find the seclusion helps me think, plus it's not that far to walk. Guy can use the exercise. Think what you will of it.
Yeah I'm curious on what Trixie whispered to Dash as well, but so far I love the story very hard to put it down when I start reading it.
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Thanks! I... think?
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Penis is magic.
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It can, just keep writing and accept all constructive criticism thrown at you, then you will improve in no time.
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You are insane, and I love it!
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You have my attention :3
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"Your fly is unzipped."
1041512 lol to accept constructive criticism I have to get some comments period, aside from people I know outside of FiMFiction no one really comments on my story.
What?! Dash likes mares? How shocking!!!
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I'll give your first chapter of Pineapple Pie some critic reading tomorrow ^^
1041512 Thank you, me and my reading group will be here all week/month/year/century.
Probably not century. The rest of us have lives too!
Bah.
I can read with you!
I fear for my computer's safety in that situation, though reading the party master can be quite fun.
Ah sometimes wonder why you invite me t' these things...
An honest opinion is a good opinion...though you do rip into some authors quite badly.
'S because their stories ARE BAD.
Dash, Rarity?
I come for the laughs. Flying practice has fallen off a bit, so I'm catching up on Daring Do and these stories.
Still keeping up?
I'm still the best flyer in Equestria. Even the Wonderbolts have their own time off!
Though we do seem to trip over our fair share of bad stories,
The good reads like this one more than make up for it.
I just wish some of these conflicts weren't so...well...
emotionally damaging...
Oh come now, Fluttershy, a good conflict obviously will have some heart-rending moments.
Why is a conflict necessary though? Why can't we all just get along?
If we all got along, then why would we write about it? It becomes the norm, nothing exciting. The world would become gray!
Gray? You mean everything would die? No!
No, no, not THAT kind of gray. I mean it wouldn't be exciting to write about. We write to create an emotional response in the reader; interest, sadness, laughter and anger! An author's innate goal is to cause something to light up in the reader! Whether this be the sadness of death or the happiness of a wedding.
Still...
Just think about it. For every difficult struggle, for every hard battle, for every heart-rending moment...there's a happy ending just waiting at the end of the dark tunnel, and it's all the more satisfying to reach it. Punishing the villain, learning from your past, accepting a crime or simply forgiving a friend. It all becomes so much more.
...I suppose that's right...
I...I come for the nice stories. Those stories the authors call 'one-shots', nice little comedies where we all share a laugh...
1041933 Eeee! ~hugs~
1042042You, my friend are crazy... And I'm BUCKING LOVING IT!
I see clop in the future, with a side-order of story
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1044794 Anime stereotype, when one of the characters sees something especially sexy (nudity included), they get a nose bleed.
I'm, quite sadly, very susceptible to this...so my room got flooded. Thank God I have more than six litres of blood in my system!
I STILL don't know how you have so much!
It's a mystery!
*Steel gestures in a ghostly fashion.*
WoooOOOOoooOOOOoooo...MYYYYSTERRYYYYY...
*sigh*.
You never let me have any fun...
1044839 I'm glad you enjoy our little skits. I find a preference for them as well, since it helps me improve in my writing.
Though you still surprise me with some of your mistakes.
Happens to the best of us!
Suuuuure.
Bah...take your cynicism back to the orchard.
You don't seem to DO a lot of writing though, dear.
Well, that's a problem I've landed myself in. My trains of thought are pretty hard to stop, and that gives me a lot of ideas for a story; it's how I write such long ones without a planning stage. Just, without that planning stage, writer's block is REALLY HARD to beat. I've got the scene figured out in my head, I just can't decide on how to describe it, and whether to have dialogue in it or not...
Well, you're trying, right?
Yeah, I suppose...SWB has to get a continuation, and SP is the foundation of my entire story universe. Getting both stories to completion...well, it'd be quite an achievement for me, and it's my hope that I can provide a nice horror fic and a good funny fic for all the readers out there.
1046717Cool. Btw, no idea what the abbreviations were. I get that they're probly your stories, but idk what they stand for.
1047100 Yeah, they're abbreviations for my stories. Not gonna say what they are because that'd be advertising on another author's story, which is deemed bad by the Unspoken Rules of Authoring.
Though if you want to know the titles, just send me a PM.
3 days and no update!
I must know what kind of delicious plot lies in store for the next chapter!
Omg, I have missed all the updates, and it didn't tell me they were up.
Anyways, great job on the chapters. I haven't read the one I am currently on right now (28), so I will read that and probably edit this comment again about how much of an amazing job you are doing. Keep up the good work!
From hell, to you, and back again,
Soto Konoha
Edit: Oh, great. Lol, this will be interesting. Great job, again. (Like I said earlier.) Also, sorry for the lack of presence. I was on vacation, and I was incapable of acquiring internet service. Now, I am back in the city of Vegas, and with more free time than ever. I will be able to post the new chapter of my story by the end of this week, and I can start my new story as well. Anyways, good job, I'm back, expect a lot from me, and keep up the good work!
From hell, to you, and back again, (again)
Soto Konoha