Hey I'm Gol D Colt (or Gol for short) And I adore writing stories with massive tasty hoots and gender bent characters.
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I have loved the work of Brush Stroke for a long time now. It is great to see a story about him finally.
That being said I can't help but feel that this chapter was a little rushed. It escalated a bit too quickly. :unsure sweetie:
The sexy writing could be toned down slightly because it is a bit too flagrant :twilight sheepish:
That being said: I can't wait to see more! :pinkie happy:
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I'm glad you like and thank for the criticize
Overall nice set up and better then most guys lemons. But you need more spice. Dont just say he increased his speed say what happens and how he dose it. steam from his nose, clenched ass, grit teeth as hw blows the mares body sending ripples across her body that seemed to only come back with equal force as her body clashed agents his. You know the stuff man get detailed and slather it in jalapenos
will it continue?
8270669 usually when that needs to be asked the answer is already clear....
but don't lose hope , just recently some good fics from years ago i subbed to got revived....
Sweet new chapter, but when will the Princesses and Mane 6 show up since they are listed in the description for the story, also in that Dream scene I'm guessing that was Brush Stroke as a male Alicorn?
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They'll slowly up after the third Chapter. Don't worry they a role in this >:3
Pls keep the story an alicorns harem up
Hot & sexy story but it is the end because I don't see any kind of motivation from a writer who made that story.
Lactation is top on the list fetish
when is chapter 3
Are you gonna finally update this amazing sexy story, and your other stories that aren't completed for this year of 2021?
Are you coming back?
Are you going to continue this?
Update?
Update???
This is amazing story might sadly not be continued.
Are you going to continue this story anytime soon?
Hello?
Will this continue?
You have been gone for a while?