Interesting and sexy.
But, does it make me a bad person to not care for the, "Spike X Rarity", shipping anymore? There are just really, really better choices out now.

I know, I know, he's going to have sexual encounter with the other girls, but these two... Sorry. I'll stop. Sorry again, looking forward to the rest of the story.

A sex scavenger hunt. Best birthday present anyone could ever get.

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Hey, that's your opinion, man. Don't worry about what others think of it. Though, if you're that concerned about it, you can just keep it to yourself. With me, sure other ships have come to harbor like Sparlight, StarTrix, TenderBloom, and countless more, but Sparity is still gonna be one of my favorites, regardless of whatever canon, trends, or opinions say.

So Spike got a new iphone with a video of 9 hotties in sweaters only singing happy birthday day.....Spike.....i envy you...why can't my phone have that

another fic from you? sweet. Unluckily for me, I don't have the time to read for now. This will remain in the read later bookshelf for a while

Mr WriterWriter, you've got a repetition that needs to be looked at. It seems that the following passage has been duplicated:

"A-all..mine...?" Deep down, he knew that was an absurd question. But, in a case like this, it's impossible to not want at least some personal confirmation.

"Every..." her voice came out in a husky purr, "...inch." Spike shivered when her tongue slide along his neck, albeit briefly.

"Rarity...wait, the massage gel..." During it all, he'd felt some of it run onto where she'd lick. Even though it was no secret that everything at the spa was non-toxic, it still had to taste nasty as hell!

"...is edible." She playfully smacked her lips, "Mmm, pineapple and sexy dragon, my favorite."

Spike was now in a quandary; the mare he'd been crushing on ever since he first came to Ponyville was now sitting on him, nude, and had flat out just offered herself to him.

And he was drawing a complete blank as what to do next! Most of his fantasies had been focused around just getting her to notice him. Now though... As such, he did the only think he could really think of: he just stared, with both hands at his sides.

Rarity, apparently, was aware of his dilemma and had plans of her own. With one surprisingly smooth move, she pushed herself up towards him, just enough to put her chest an inch from his face. While at the same time, he felt her grasp his hands in her magic and moved them to a supple set of hips, "Care for a taste, Spikey?"

I noticed it while I'm currently reading it. It's probably a mistake on your part, but I think you need to look at it and delete the duplicated passage.

"A-all..mine...?" Deep down, he knew that was an absurd question. But, in a case like this, it's impossible to not want at least some personal confirmation.

"Every..." her voice came out in a husky purr, "...inch." Spike shivered when her tongue slide along his neck, albeit briefly.

"Rarity...wait, the massage gel..." During it all, he'd felt some of it run onto where she'd lick. Even though it was no secret that everything at the spa was non-toxic, it still had to taste nasty as hell!

"...is edible." She playfully smacked her lips, "Mmm, pineapple and sexy dragon, my favorite."

Spike was now in a quandary; the mare he'd been crushing on ever since he first came to Ponyville was now sitting on him, nude, and had flat out just offered herself to him.

And he was drawing a complete blank as what to do next! Most of his fantasies had been focused around just getting her to notice him. Now though... As such, he did the only think he could really think of: he just stared, with both hands at his sides.

Rarity, apparently, was aware of his dilemma and had plans of her own. With one surprisingly smooth move, she pushed herself up towards him, just enough to put her chest an inch from his face. While at the same time, he felt her grasp his hands in her magic and moved them to a supple set of hips, "Care for a taste, Spikey?"

This section is written twice.

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Fixed it

"However, that will have to wait for now. After all, you still have your other presents to find." She gave him one more kiss, slipping the phone into his hand as she did. "Better hurry. The rest are waiting"

Yeah Spike. You have eight more presents to go.

Found an error

Rarity, apparently, was aware of his dilemma and had plans of her own. With one surprisingly smooth move, she pushed herself up towards him, just enough to put her chest an inch from his face. While at the same time, he felt her grasp his hands in her magic and moved them to a supple set of hips, "Care for a taste, Spikey?"

Spike was now in a quandary; the mare he'd been crushing on ever since he first came to Ponyville was now sitting on him, nude, and had flat out just offered herself to him.

And he was drawing a complete blank as what to do next! Most of his fantasies had been focused around just getting her to notice him. Now though... As such, he did the only think he could really think of: he just stared, with both hands at his sides.

Rarity, apparently, was aware of his dilemma and had plans of her own. With one surprisingly smooth move, she pushed herself up towards him, just enough to put her chest an inch from his face. While at the same time, he felt her grasp his hands in her magic and moved them to a supple set of hips, "Care for a taste, Spikey?"

You repeated the first paragraph twice.

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Word. Was going to delete it after I re-read it. Hmmm, may still do it.

Nuru Massage. The best massage to ever be made

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I just noticed it--looks like our writer corrected one repeated passage, but inadvertably created another...

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Ok, I think all the double paragraphs now

i love these type of stories, cant wait for the next ch

My body is ready.

I think Spike's is too.

Fuck yes! Keep this going please I love this story!

I'm loving this story. Excited to read more.

I look forward to the next pieces of brilliance you present.

And this is only the first clue to kickoff of hot and heavy rutting.

Spike.EXE has encountered an error. Please reboot self destruct.

Please put warnings of kinks like double-dick in the description. Not everyone likes that and you'll only tick people off for making them waste part of their life.

LOL look at all the snowflakes complaining about "trigger" and such. Get over it kids, the story has a Mature and Sex tag on it. That pretty much tells you it is going to have adult content in it. Don't like that, don't read it!

I look forward to more story

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Oh you poor widdle baby.

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Ignore him. This is the same guy who called me a liar because I 'omitted' the same thing in Sea of Amore

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You do know its a common thing for reptiles right?

Looking forward to more, is it bad I kinda wanna see Ember being submissive with Spike?

'MAYDAY! MAYDAY! DEFCON 1! I repeat: DEFCON MOTHERBUCKING 1!'

I couldn't stop laughing after reading that!

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True One: Navy is right, Shiro, various male reptiles have multi-penises, I think the chameleon has a four headed one.

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Depends on the reptile though. Snakes i know have two. Crocodiles, alligators, and turtles all have one though.

Great chapter but I felt I should let you know if you translate the french your sentence reads "that was it is truly magnificent"