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Ron Jeremy Pony


What to say about me... I'm a novelist, I enjoy writing Fanfiction (seriously I like it. Although I mainly do Justice League or Highschool of the Dead), and thanks to Dr. Whooves I found FIM.

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Meeting a new member of Second's family, an Applosian mob boss, and watching two of the tackiest people come together. It's all in the day of Sour's and Second's relationship.

Join Sour and Second as they deal with the crazy that is Second's uncle Pop Culture Lens, the mob boss, and Pop Culture's uncanny ability to getting into trouble.

Huge thanks to Nico-Stone Rupan  for co-authoring this.

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Comments ( 10 )

Loved it great job. Cant stop laughing

Gotta check it out later.

Wait, who is Second, and why doesn't he have a tag?

This was good. I got some guilty pleasure out of seeing someone shut Sour Sweet up with just one look, and I enjoyed how awesome and intelligent Second Person was.

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Wait, who is Second, and why doesn't he have a tag?

Second Person is an OC from my series of Sour Sweet stories. They started out told in the 2nd Person perspective with the character being only referred to as "You" until I eventually got tired of it. A user called Kul gets credit for his name.

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Wow. This was....oh my god it was awesome! It used slightly crude humor in a way that works. Nice job!

Pop shook his head and held up his hand. “Sorry kiddo, honest injun here.”

Sour rolled her eyes. “Over the top racism aside, who is Don Spearhead?”

:ajbemused: PC bs aside....

The group of mobsters left, leaving behind a single fedora that was resting on their table.

Sour grinned as she lifted it and put it on her head. “ Finders keepers .”

Oh dear god no!!!

Oh my god, I want more stories like this!

Can we all agree that the guy in the mascot costume is the real hero of this story? I know I wouldn't be able to stick to the script when confronted with a mob boss, five goons, and the Pop Cultural Detritus that Walks Like a Man.

In all seriousness, hilarious story. Thanks to both of you for putting this together.

Comment posted by JediAlexColbent deleted Aug 18th, 2017
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