When she bit into it, though, she almost choked as the fetid fluid inside squirted into the back of her throat. On the inside, the apple had long since decayed into a mixture of rot and maggots.
Hmm....
I sense an analogy.
Great first few chapters, as always. As with "Desert Water" you have managed to build up a spectacular world for your tale, as well as convey the nagging feeling of a hideous, sudden end. I look forward to see where this goes, and I know I will not be disappointed
Hmm....
I sense an analogy.
Great first few chapters, as always. As with "Desert Water" you have managed to build up a spectacular world for your tale, as well as convey the nagging feeling of a hideous, sudden end. I look forward to see where this goes, and I know I will not be disappointed
I thought I should mention that Rarity's mane is violet, not blue