I'm a simple guy... I love Sci-Twi x Sunset/SugarCoat, and Pony Twilight x Celestia/Chrysalis/MoonDancer/Trixie. Also, I love Fighting Games, Dark Souls series and Yuri in general.
Twilight Sparkle is fast approaching her first Hearth's Warming with all of her wonderful new friends, but when she receives an invitation from both groups, she tries to bring them together... and becomes the prize in a brand new Friendship Games.
Princess Twilight Sparkle has faced many fierce adversaries in her time. But can any of them compare to the devilish machinations of...targeted marketing?!
8226066 I really like both girls for Sci-Twi, but I'm writing the upcoming chapters, and time will tell if this ends in threesome or if she had to chose one girl.
Since Princess Twi is gone, the role of main singer is upon Shimmer, she didn't mind, but there are ocasions where she makes duet with Rainbow Dash or Pinkie Pie.
Rainbow Dash is lead vocals in the Rainbooms.
And...I'm sorry, but I couldn't make it past the fourth paragraph. You mix past and present tense, miss out some words, I just can't get immersed in the story. In the example above, the 'is' should be 'was', and the 'are' should be 'were'. Downvote from me.
8247678 Actually, I care more about this kind of comments than just the dislikes, and well, I don't mind editing this as many times as long it's need to be done.
I'm not going to abandon this story, but I will try to keep writing it on spanish (not here obviosly), finish it, and then I'll try to translate it and complete it here.
I edited the first chapter, and soon I'll do the same with chapter 2.
This story was created to have 6 or 7 chapters, but depending on how much I progress in my language, maybe they're ending being like 10 or 12 chapters
So...threesome?
A good start. Felt the colour text for each character was off putting. Keep it up.
8226066
I really like both girls for Sci-Twi, but I'm writing the upcoming chapters, and time will tell if this ends in threesome or if she had to chose one girl.
what is this a cross over with
8229589
Not sure if you are serious or... .-.?
8231242
the discirpt dont say what its a cross over with
8231416
The Crossover is with Guilty Gear
8231439
thank you neverplayed guility gear
8231558
You are not the only one. And there are almost none fimfics with that game series, that's why the first chapters are like a tutorial.
Rainbow Dash is lead vocals in the Rainbooms.
And...I'm sorry, but I couldn't make it past the fourth paragraph. You mix past and present tense, miss out some words, I just can't get immersed in the story. In the example above, the 'is' should be 'was', and the 'are' should be 'were'. Downvote from me.
8247678
Actually, I care more about this kind of comments than just the dislikes, and well, I don't mind editing this as many times as long it's need to be done.
At least this let me know my mistakes, thanks!
8247786
You're welcome, and thank you for taking the comment the way it was intended.
8226103
I added now a cover art for this fimfic xD
I'm not going to abandon this story, but I will try to keep writing it on spanish (not here obviosly), finish it, and then I'll try to translate it and complete it here.
I edited the first chapter, and soon I'll do the same with chapter 2.
This story was created to have 6 or 7 chapters, but depending on how much I progress in my language, maybe they're ending being like 10 or 12 chapters
Going to call it now but my bet is Pinkie mains Faust or I-No.