"Lulu? Oh no, I am not Lulu for the time being. I am... NIGHTMARE MOON!!!" she shouted. She let out an evil laugh, flaring her sharp, predatorial teeth. You felt a bit scared, but the more you stared at her, the you started to think how sexy she looks in this form.
"Thanks Luna. Will do." You walked into her room and took one of the books from her bookshelf and started reading it. As the time went by, Luna started yawning, hour after hour, wanting to go to sleep for the day and you were reading through every book in her shelf. Finally it was 7 AM and you were growing a bit tired. Luna definitely felt same way you did judging by her yawning.
8241386 Statistically the likelihood of alien horse bipeds speaking in an earth language or having the same written language, is so statistically low and unrealistic that you may as well not even talk about it. And that doesn't even get into the biological dangers to both native and the 'invader' of deadly hazards of biological or viral induced sicknesses and diseases due to an immune system with no defenses against the new biological or viral dangers.
when is the next chapter?
Love the story, keep it up!
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I'm working on it, I was at a camping trip all weekend
My mind immediately jumped to Wesly saying that in The Princess Bride.
Blank Check? How the he'll is that even close to a classic ?
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And your father killed my father. Prepare to die.
BLU heavy: oh nooooo!!!
BLU demoman: oh cripe!!!
BLU solder: oh c**p!!!
BLU pyro: (muffled scream)
Minor typo
Too many instantly
The monk
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whoops, lol
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Statistically the likelihood of alien horse bipeds speaking in an earth language or having the same written language, is so statistically low and unrealistic that you may as well not even talk about it. And that doesn't even get into the biological dangers to both native and the 'invader' of deadly hazards of biological or viral induced sicknesses and diseases due to an immune system with no defenses against the new biological or viral dangers.
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dude, thinking about that makes my brain hurt. My editor and I try.
Tried the chapter Dialogue sounded forced like robots reading a script
Good idea though