"She now stood much taller than Twilight. Her body was still a chaotic jumble of candy, but it was now smooth and sleek with long limbs and longer claws. Inside her exposed ribcage a sickly green flame pulsed with unnatural light, unbearable to look upon. Her eyes were just as wild as before, and her demonic maw dripped acidic green saliva. Her mane streamed out behind her, red and black liquorice wriggling and twitching with a life of its own. A long tale made of the same substance curled into a black and red candy striped, spiked scorpion tail. The most dramatic change, however, were the addition of several wings and horns. Her wings were long and skeletal, with not a scrap of webbing or flesh but instead what looked like six sharp candy cane striped blades, black and red. Each of the twelve long appendages ended in a cruel hook that scraped the floor. Her horns were no less striking. Seven in total were spaced evenly around her skull, curling straight upwards. They gave the impression that the Candy Mare was wearing a tall, spiky crown. Each horn was candy striped a different color of the rainbow and glowed ominously with barely contained power." i want fanart... NOW!
"In response, the Candy Mare extended her left arm and opened her hand palm upward. Seven jewels, which Twilight had just taken to be pieces of candy, detached themselves from the monsters horns and hovered in a tight circle over her palm." THE GEODES! .... crap... candy now has telekinesis, telepathy, super strength, super speed, shields, exploding... stuff (body parts since she is made of candy?), and... animal talking.
"Her broken wings evaporated wings" .... what?
“There’s a bomb! I don’t know why, but when I touched her I had a vision. I felt what she felt and... There’s some kind of countdown! An explosion large enough to wipe out this place and the city above could go off any second!” Panic replaced the madness in the demons eyes, “Make her stop it! Only she can stop it!” *damn it exposition powers!*
"The End..." NOPE! *clicks next page*
Comment posted by Knackerman deleted Jan 24th, 2018
...Yeah that's an artifact from when this chapter was different.
and... animal talking.
Not sure how that one would help her, but I kind of think of it like how Negaduck got Quackerjack's 'wackiness' when he absorbed the other villains powers. It wasn't a useful ability, but he got it anyways.
And if you get that reference we are both so very old.
Not sure how that one would help her, but I kind of think of it like how Negaduck got Quackerjack's 'wackiness' when he absorbed the other villains powers. It wasn't a useful ability, but he got it anyways.
And if you get that reference we arebothso very old.
"She now stood much taller than Twilight. Her body was still a chaotic jumble of candy, but it was now smooth and sleek with long limbs and longer claws. Inside her exposed ribcage a sickly green flame pulsed with unnatural light, unbearable to look upon. Her eyes were just as wild as before, and her demonic maw dripped acidic green saliva. Her mane streamed out behind her, red and black liquorice wriggling and twitching with a life of its own. A long tale made of the same substance curled into a black and red candy striped, spiked scorpion tail.
The most dramatic change, however, were the addition of several wings and horns. Her wings were long and skeletal, with not a scrap of webbing or flesh but instead what looked like six sharp candy cane striped blades, black and red. Each of the twelve long appendages ended in a cruel hook that scraped the floor. Her horns were no less striking. Seven in total were spaced evenly around her skull, curling straight upwards. They gave the impression that the Candy Mare was wearing a tall, spiky crown. Each horn was candy striped a different color of the rainbow and glowed ominously with barely contained power." i want fanart... NOW!
"In response, the Candy Mare extended her left arm and opened her hand palm upward. Seven jewels, which Twilight had just taken to be pieces of candy, detached themselves from the monsters horns and hovered in a tight circle over her palm." THE GEODES! .... crap... candy now has telekinesis, telepathy, super strength, super speed, shields, exploding... stuff (body parts since she is made of candy?), and... animal talking.
"Her broken wings evaporated wings" .... what?
“There’s a bomb! I don’t know why, but when I touched her I had a vision. I felt what she felt and... There’s some kind of countdown! An explosion large enough to wipe out this place and the city above could go off any second!” Panic replaced the madness in the demons eyes, “Make her stop it! Only she can stop it!” *damn it exposition powers!*
"The End..." NOPE! *clicks next page*
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...Yeah that's an artifact from when this chapter was different.
Not sure how that one would help her, but I kind of think of it like how Negaduck got Quackerjack's 'wackiness' when he absorbed the other villains powers. It wasn't a useful ability, but he got it anyways.
And if you get that reference we are both so very old.
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i do not
Lemme guess, the Candy Mare comes back in the next chapter?
nuke went off hooray!!
but how will candy deus ex back from this?
Time to activate Agent Armor, probably.