In the year 2066, Soldiers everywhere have adapted to the form of Exo Suits, they change the ways in combat and warfare. A U.S. Staff Sergeant Marine on mission is transported to Equestria and now enhanced technology will meet Magic.
One thing that I've noticed, is that whenever anyone here is listing out branches of the US Armed Forces, they for some reason always neglect to mention the US Coast Guard. I've never really known why.
The weapons sound cool and i like the presentation Also interesting place in the timeline not something im used to reading Well Done Author BTW update soon plz
The muzzle velocity of the m4 is 2970 ft/s or 910 m/s. Obviously future weapons will have a higher muzzle velocity, I'd guess about 1100-1200 m/s if they still use chemical proppelent. Though I basically pulled that number out of thin air.
However in your story you said your sniper was an energy weapon, I'd assume a rail gun of some kind. If I were to hazard a guess I'd say maybe in the 1500 m/s range. I know the US navy are testing rail guns today with muzzle velocities of about 2500 m/s (7 times the speed of sound) though these are the type of guns designed to go on ships, not an infantry weapon.
Just to give a bit of context the speed of light is about 300,000,000 m/s.
Good story, the only two recommendations I could give you are, or is, to (1) Get a professional editor or run this through multiple grammar checkimg websites. (2) Stop using the "..." or ellipses so much. It really makes the story feel repitive and to use ellipses so much is completely unnecessary.
8511089 I use Grammarly, not the premium edition so yeah.
also, I do gotta stop with the ellipses but to me. half the time it gives that silence basically. Is it makes it feel like someone is reading it, but I'm trying to basically cut it to when characters speak only, but I can't help myself.
8516610 I kinda had a few things borrowed from there, but the Exo suit in this story is very different, look at the cover art...as well as things I put in which was never really thought of.
8518371 no, I don't want to turn this into a Call of Duty Future clone, because I think some already think that, even if I could Ethan is stuck on Equestria, he couldn't go back.
I'm pretty sure a few physicists would like to have a word with you about your faster than light bullets.
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The way I see it, it’s not breaking any laws, it’s referencing a higher one that we are unaware of.
Edit: just read the chapter, think he meant faster than Sound
One thing that I've noticed, is that whenever anyone here is listing out branches of the US Armed Forces, they for some reason always neglect to mention the US Coast Guard. I've never really known why.
8493387
I don't know how fast bullets travel, it's just a figure of speech xD
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Coast Guard is apart of the Military but unlike the other branches Coast Guard falls under Homeland Security.
The weapons sound cool and i like the presentation
Also interesting place in the timeline not something im used to reading
Well Done Author
BTW update soon plz
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I will, but know that this is not my only story I am working on, I must give all my stories the attention and from the people who like it. ;)
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The muzzle velocity of the m4 is 2970 ft/s or 910 m/s. Obviously future weapons will have a higher muzzle velocity, I'd guess about 1100-1200 m/s if they still use chemical proppelent. Though I basically pulled that number out of thin air.
However in your story you said your sniper was an energy weapon, I'd assume a rail gun of some kind. If I were to hazard a guess I'd say maybe in the 1500 m/s range. I know the US navy are testing rail guns today with muzzle velocities of about 2500 m/s (7 times the speed of sound) though these are the type of guns designed to go on ships, not an infantry weapon.
Just to give a bit of context the speed of light is about 300,000,000 m/s.
Hope this helps
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Okay I edited the faster than the quote XD
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Unless in Wartime. It may not be under the DoD normally, but that does not make it any less of an armed force.
I could say quite a lot about this story Hunter...But I'm feeling you don't want me to do it)?
Good story, the only two recommendations I could give you are, or is, to (1) Get a professional editor or run this through multiple grammar checkimg websites. (2) Stop using the "..." or ellipses so much. It really makes the story feel repitive and to use ellipses so much is completely unnecessary.
Thanks for reading my recommendations!
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I use Grammarly, not the premium edition so yeah.
also, I do gotta stop with the ellipses but to me. half the time it gives that silence basically. Is it makes it feel like someone is reading it, but I'm trying to basically cut it to when characters speak only, but I can't help myself.
It’s good a little cod Advanced warfare in there but with better weapons
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I kinda had a few things borrowed from there, but the Exo suit in this story is very different, look at the cover art...as well as things I put in which was never really thought of.
Please tell me you borrowed the Goliath armor
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I'm not doing that, again it's not supposed to be advanced warfare really.
Can you do something close to it
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no, I don't want to turn this into a Call of Duty Future clone, because I think some already think that, even if I could Ethan is stuck on Equestria, he couldn't go back.
Okay
read first chapter like it going 2 wait for a few more chapters to come out before i do some heavy reading
Is this story dead?
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Goodness no! Things have just been happening lately, I promise that nothing of mine is dead, life gets in the way however.
What's with all the elipses?
The Recker .44 looks like a reskin of Crimson. But instead of a three round burst, it fires two shots at the same time.