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GivingSpider
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nice work
8178551
Thank you for that and thank you for reading
Will read later after reading prequel but I must say that with Discord involved the pet play could easily become a bit more literal and, dare I say, bestial.
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I imagine that any sex with Discord could go in that direction.
I've actually deliberately explored that with another fic
Another great story. Really hot cant wait to see more.
Maybe get that pegging fic~
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Glad you enjoyed that
Discord being on the recieving end of a good mounting is still on my 'to do' list
quite a bit better. I still feel there is room for more serious and skillful training. That she learns things like heel and is disciplined in a more serious way.
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The next time I visit this idea I hope to have more advanced training and firmer discipline play
I'm glad to hear that this felt like an improvement over the first fic.
Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts on both stories and thank you for reading
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One thing to keep in mind is that discipline is far more about the attitude than actual punishments. It means the master has a more threatening presence and tolerates far less shenanigans.
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Thank you for that
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If I have any more advice it would be to not have it be either sexual or casual but both. Normal animal activity with sex mixed in. Right now it's constantly one or the other but never both at the same time.
Discord's assumed character and role as her master was now firmly withheld and without sacrificing a safe environment.
Withheld is wrong. I think.
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Withheld looks right, the word 'now' looks odd.
Thank you again for reading
I enjoyed this story, but spotted a few grammatical errors.
Don't you mean 'her'?
Perhaps 'His tail had to be minded' works better.
That should be 'he pushed her head back down'.
You mean 'note'?
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Thank you for catching those
I'll fix them when I can
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No worries!