Twilight Sparkle, Princess of Friendship, hurt a friend. The time has come to face herself, and Fluttershy, and ask for forgiveness. What she gets is a new teacher.
Well, I hate to say it, but I have to stop tracking this fic here. It's not that it's badly written, far from it.
Rather, various points in the chapter just made me feel more and more uncomfortable, and the following paragraph is where I gave up on trying to get through it completely:
Twilight drew the toy back and pushed forward, each thrust sinking more of the black thing into Starlight's body. She took it slow, especially with the medial ring. Starlight gasped and whinnied repeatedly, mostly on the return thrusts. "Good girl, you like me cleaning you?"
Usually, I can at least finish reading a story that makes me uncomfortable, even if I won't fave or upvote it in the end, but something about this chapter, and especially that paragraph, just pushed me over the edge.
It might just be that Starlight is my favorite pony, so seeing her be treated this way, even though she likes it in story, just doesn't sit right with me. Which is the opposite of what I thought would happen. The fact that I personally feel Starlight would be a dom might also have something to do with it, but I don't know why that would cause me to stop here and not in one of the previous chapters.
But whatever the reason, as I said, this is where I stop. Good luck to you and the commissioner on the rest of it.
Well, I hate to say it, but I have to stop tracking this fic here.
It's not that it's badly written, far from it.
Rather, various points in the chapter just made me feel more and more uncomfortable, and the following paragraph is where I gave up on trying to get through it completely:
Usually, I can at least finish reading a story that makes me uncomfortable, even if I won't fave or upvote it in the end, but something about this chapter, and especially that paragraph, just pushed me over the edge.
It might just be that Starlight is my favorite pony, so seeing her be treated this way, even though she likes it in story, just doesn't sit right with me. Which is the opposite of what I thought would happen.
The fact that I personally feel Starlight would be a dom might also have something to do with it, but I don't know why that would cause me to stop here and not in one of the previous chapters.
But whatever the reason, as I said, this is where I stop.
Good luck to you and the commissioner on the rest of it.
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Ah bridles...is there anypony you can't ship with a nice bridle?