Abby is back in Sera fighting Grubs again and she's not alone this time.
Glad to see this story updating.Lots of mistakes though but nothing that can't be fixed.Please continue.
Great work
Is it alive?
10079406Doesn't seem like it
Aw
Im sorry for tail
I hope this story is updated soon. It's awesome, with massive improvements from the first one. It's written very well, and I hope to see it continued.
I found more errors
Glad to see this story updating.
Lots of mistakes though but nothing that can't be fixed.
Please continue.
Great work
Is it alive?
10079406
Doesn't seem like it
Aw
Im sorry for tail
I hope this story is updated soon. It's awesome, with massive improvements from the first one. It's written very well, and I hope to see it continued.
I found more errors