Spike returns to his hometown of Ponyville and reunites with old friends and old flames reignite, much to his shock
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hell of a chapter, keep up the good work, i'm always waiting for the next chapters :)
Something Gothic for Moonlight.
Love this chapter.
And Spike, have a little self control there, man. You got six girls waiting for you out there.
I wonder how forgiving Twilight and the other girls will be when they find out.
I'm surprised Ember didn't punch him in the face for that.
And I wished this chapter could've been longer. Oh well.
Well, let's see here:
Moonlight Raven & Sunshine Smiles - Honestly, I find it hard to see Spike dating the sisters separately. Maybe have Spike going on a date, with both of them, and it ends with him getting a double kiss from them.
Sunset Shimmer - Sunset obviously wants to show Spike that she's different than who she was before, and that she really cares about him. I honestly think maybe she should be saved for last, so as to make her more determined to win Spike's forgiveness, as well as making her feel more shunned. Maybe have it where she tries to ask Spike out on a date, but something keeps interrupting her, and Spike ends up going on a date with the other girls. During his date with the others, Sunset repairs an old gift from Spike, she once broke when she used one of her karate moves on him, and tried to show it to him, once she finally has her date with the guy, only for it to break, when a fight broke out, between her, and Garble. Then, it rains, and Sunset tried to recover what's left of her gift, but failed, since it got washed away. Soon, Sunset got sick, and they went back to Sunset's home, to get her treated. While Sunset recovers, the two started to talk, about the gift, and how Sunset felt haunted about her past and that she'll never be forgiven, since she's lost the gift forever. Spike spoke otherwise, and say that her act of redemption was enough for a gift.
That's all I've got so far, and forgive me if I'm too into a Sunset Shimmer redemption story.
First make-out session in his hometown. Five more to go. As for what he can do with the other girls, one thing he should do with either one or all of them is go to a movieplex in the next town over (which hopefully isn't Canterlot). I hope his girls in Canterlot wait on visiting Spike until after he at least spent time with all of them. I hope it's a surprise visit as well.
So Spike will probably be in the middle of a harem and then the Canterlot Cuties come in and shit hits the fan. Well it was nice knowing ya Spike.
Good chapter, can't wait for Moondancer.
Okay, I got it for the other two.
Moon Dancer-On her date with Spike, the two will go to the local library, or local bookstore, and there they just bond over their favorite novels, and talk about the creativity of their favorite authors: Stephen King, J.K.Rowling, A.K.Yearling, etc.
Starlight Glimmer-Took me awhile, since I'm trying to think of a scenario where it doesn't involve Starlight kidnapping Spike and lock him up in the basement or anything (Don't you put that in the story!) Maybe have Starlight invite Spike over to her house to read some of her rough drafts for some of the books she would be writing later as an author. Then, Starlight and Spike went out to get some ice creams, or whatever it is Starlight would do, to keep Spike from leaving her, by giving him a good time. I don't know. Just don't put kidnapping!
Dreqamily, I dont know why but that makes me giggle.
Is it absolutely necessary to read the first story?
8187021 Yes it is if you're too understand Spike and how he was with the girls he knew from Canterlot
Amazing start so far. Im loving it :) keep up the amazing work.
8187021
Ye, probably