The invasion has failed, but you're somehow alive. The sun shines down through the canopy, bathing your black carapace in a golden light. You're tired, hungry, and alone. Dragging yourself to your hooves, you begin plodding aimlessly through the woods.
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This is pretty good, I like the great descriptions of the environment and people. Especially with the fight between the reader and the guard, it really felt like they were injured from the previous battle.
I do have a question though: The part with the fish in the lake implies the reader eating a fish. Does that mean they need food and love to survive in your canon? Or is one necessary, and the other is for comfort? (I haven't watched the new seasons, so it could've been explained in the show and I just don't know it
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Anyways, looking forward to seeing where this goes.
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Thanks, I'm glad you like it so far!
As for your question, that's a good one, and something that everyone seems to address differently. But yes, here I'm going with changelings needing a bit of both.
It is interesting reading everything happen without dialogue being used. I am interested on this continuing, it is being done well. Good luck on the writing!
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Thanks! I'm glad you're liking it so far.
Echoing the sentiment already expressed, for a story with no dialogue this is supremely interesting! Really glad I happened upon this, and hope you keep writing!
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I intend to!
Thanks a bunch.
Please update soon. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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Haha, will do. :) I'm just busy with some other projects right now, but I'll update when I can.
Wonderful story. May I use some things from this? I'm bad at starting a story like you have yours done. Also I'm using Microsoft Word to write mine. If you have another suggestion I would gladly appreciate it.