8362891 well not everyday you see a deadly opponent who needs training and can match a predator in melee combat but how are you going to deal with the eminent hunting party's sent to equstria looking for the one that could decent one of there own
"What if they think i'm evil? What if they think I took your body over? How are we going to break the news about Rarity?" Dying said hyperventilating.
"Don't worry about those things now, we still have the rest of the day to come up with the answers." Twilight said trying to calm down Dying.
"But what if we can't think of anything. I'll be the reason your friendship ends with them. If that happens then you'll hate me and you won't like me as your brainmate!"Dying cried.
Twilight chuckled a little. "Ok you are so much like me. You need to calm down and relax. Trust me when I say I do some crazy things when I freak out. So right now breath and do the exercise Cadence taught me."
Dying exhaled and put her hoof to her chest and then extended it outwards. She reapeted the action for a couple of minutes. "Wow that really does work." Dying said feeling better.
"See now we can work together on what to say to them, ok?" Twilight said.
"Ok." Dying replied.
"Now let's go see what else we can salvage." Twilight said as she left the storage room.
Like Twilights brainmate
"brainmate" love it
I am enjoying the story but I also feel it seems rushed.
This is great lol I can't stop laughing about them setting the mood for a chase scene But who knows where your going to take us next and I can't wait
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I'm sorry it seems that way. I'm not trying to rush it. Hopefully it's better for the next chapter
What's up with the fragment sentences?
I get the feeling that Celestia may actually enjoy having fewer nobles around as it should speed up the government. Maybe become a republic instead?
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What do you mean by that?
This is a great story. It's so interesting.
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Thank you
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I needs another chapter
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It coming. We'll be having a surprise guest next chapter as well.
Ok I seriously want to fight this twilight and her brain mate it would be fun
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I glad that my version of Twilight, along with her OC brainmate seem to be a worthy challenge for you. [tips hat and bows to you.]
8362891 well not everyday you see a deadly opponent who needs training and can match a predator in melee combat but how are you going to deal with the eminent hunting party's sent to equstria looking for the one that could decent one of there own
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Well Dying was only using a fraction of her true power.
8363915 cool say would you be ok with a spar in pm for fun if.you want
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Sure, sounds fun.
Damn those humans to hell
Celestia handling this a bit strange now
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I thought the same