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8011531 The gore is just to accommodate for the fact that it will exist. The story will not feature a mass amount of it, but it will most certainly be present.
This is extremely interesting. The prior history hinted at in the first chapter, the energetic fight scene at the end, youve done a decent job of characterization.
So, did the inspiration manifestation take over Instead of being eaten by spike?
8013199 Logically, the Inspiration Manifestation wouldn't have just disappeared. There's an explanation for how it and its power came back. So no, there's no need for an alternate universe tag :P
8011763 That's cool to hear. I play through it every now and then, as Cortana's cryptic lines give such inspiration for a lot of the ideas and stories I work on :P Cool to meet another fan of Halo.
8013781 And my gamertag is exactly what my username is here. "Mega T22". I play mostly on the Xbox One now, but I don't have a problem coming back to 360 every now and again d:
8053443, the gore tag is there because there will be gore. It's not excessive, and I don't intend for much of the violence in the story to have an exceeding presence of gore. However, just keep in mind that most battles do occur with sharp blades, powerful swings of weapons capable of breaking bone, and superhuman-like battles that could leave devastating wounds. I'm sure that's enough for you to understand :)
Amma track diz
tell me this is a reference to halo 3
if not....well i was misled
AWESOMEEE!!
8010728
Absolutely a reference to Halo. Glad you caught it ^~^
That's it, I'm calling it, Rarity is Miss Bejeweled!
8010906 that while fitting would be so cliche it's almost insultive... almost
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8010906
I can't tell if this is heavy sarcasm or not I'm almost sure the last line was a dead giveaway.
8011374 I was being sarcastic towards
8010906 and the aassertion made.
not a huge fan of "gore" before i read this how bad is the gore?
8011374 I'm not being sarcastic.
8010881
figured it was a reference to such because i just did a playthrough of halo 3 on legendary not too long ago and i remembered that.
8011531
The gore is just to accommodate for the fact that it will exist. The story will not feature a mass amount of it, but it will most certainly be present.
This is extremely interesting. The prior history hinted at in the first chapter, the energetic fight scene at the end, youve done a decent job of characterization.
So, did the inspiration manifestation take over Instead of being eaten by spike?
Maybe put an alternate universe tag?
8013199
Logically, the Inspiration Manifestation wouldn't have just disappeared. There's an explanation for how it and its power came back. So no, there's no need for an alternate universe tag :P
8011763
That's cool to hear. I play through it every now and then, as Cortana's cryptic lines give such inspiration for a lot of the ideas and stories I work on :P Cool to meet another fan of Halo.
8013748
my gt for xbox 360 is UnbiddenClub59 find me and maybe we can screw around every now and again
8013781
And my gamertag is exactly what my username is here. "Mega T22". I play mostly on the Xbox One now, but I don't have a problem coming back to 360 every now and again d:
8015887, I don't understand your comment one bit :P
Damn it, you have done this so perfectly well to not knock us on our ass with one cliffhanger, but the same one twice.
Bravo, bravo. Here have a like.
Before I read this, what is the Gore tag for ?
And how bad does it get ?
8053443, the gore tag is there because there will be gore. It's not excessive, and I don't intend for much of the violence in the story to have an exceeding presence of gore. However, just keep in mind that most battles do occur with sharp blades, powerful swings of weapons capable of breaking bone, and superhuman-like battles that could leave devastating wounds. I'm sure that's enough for you to understand :)
This has my attention! Can't wait to see how the other girls treat Rarity.