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RadPanic


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Can't wait for the sequel: Pounded in the Butt by my My Little Pony fetish fanfiction, Pounded in the Butt by the Huge Implications of Meadowlark's Second Theorem of General Magic :rainbowkiss:

I hope there's a sequel.

While that was hot, Dash should've gave Twi at least a light smack upside the head, if only for purposely neglecting her like that.

Really want to see a sequel where Twi ends up on the receiving end of this and Dash decides to sit back and watch.

You make us proud, friend. At least someone still produces quality new content.

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Thank you both.

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Maybe I could have made this clearer, but: Rainbow Dash isn't mad at Twilight, because everything in between Dash thinking "Green" and Twilight saying "Red" was roleplaying—and Twi gave Dash exactly what she wanted. This was Dash's mega-submissive fantasy, and "Everyone who could rescue me is too distracted or otherwise ignores me" is just another turn-on for her. While Twi was pretending to ignore Dash, she was actually monitoring everything closely. We only see Twi putting on a show of ignoring Dash, since Dash is the viewpoint character for most of it, and she was fantasizing that whole time.

I might just go back and make some tweaks to the dialogue to make that clearer.

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And the conclusion of the trilogy will be Pounded in the Butt by the Concept of Recursion, while he too is Pounded in the Butt by the Concept of Recursion.

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Ah, OK then, thank you for clearing that up.

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Admittedly, I didn't get that either. Thanks for clarifying.

Dat title. It makes me all... Tingly.

Not a story I'm interested in reading, but I must say, consentacles is an awesome word.

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You know, since you mentioned it, their next roleplaying session might very well be a followup to the "plot" of this one. And Dash's role would be "I'm mad that you did such a lousy job rescuing me, so I'm going to sit back and watch while you're on the receiving end!"

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I hope it's a good tingling, and not the kind you need to consult a doctor about.

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To be honest, I'm definitely not the first person to use that word.

I understand not wanting to read one of my stories (there's no end to stories on this site I refuse to touch with a 40-foot pole). But if you don't mind, what about this one makes you think you'll dislike it?

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Do you take requests? I've got an interesting idea for that!

Consentacles..?!


More on this plz, I wanna be safe...

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Pounded in the Butt by the Concept of Recursion, while he too is Pounded in the Butt by the Concept of Recursion.

An oroubouros clopfic?

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I'll listen to requests, but I can't promise beforehand that anything will come of it. I've turned down requests in the past, but my longest story, Evil Expandtress, is based on a request that really inspired me.

If you want to see this idea hard enough, I do take commissions as well.

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Rainbow Dash has a rape fetish. Twilight and a very polite tentacle monster help Rainbow indulge that fetish by roleplaying in a safe, sane, and consensual manner. I, the author, withhold enough information during the clop scene to obscure the fact that it's roleplay—so it looks at first glance like Rainbow is actually getting raped, until the truth is revealed later.

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I actually have plans to write an ouroboros inflation scene in one of my ongoing fics. So kinky, it will defy physics and logic!

7970603 And then afterwards Rainbow can spend the afternoon playing with Twilight's humongous butt!

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Ok, here's my first idea:

RD gets a new Power Ponies comic that features Daring Do and Mare Do Well teaming up against the Mane-Iac while the heroes are out of town. The comic turns out to be enchanted as the two are sucked in, Twi becoming MDW and RD becoming DD.

As it turns out RD's book is a special doujin where MDW is captured and ravished by the Mane-Iac while DD "searches" for a way to "rescue" her.

If that's not your style, I've got a few other ideas... one involving Twi's book-entering spell and another involving a "retelling" of the second episode with only Twi and RD.

7970942 Sounds hot. Of course, I'd have to find a way to work inflation in. That's my main thing.

Funny you should mention that book-entering spell. I already wrote a Twilight/Moondancer fic featuring that spell: "Of Apologies and Parties".

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That's simple, she has a hair growth formula that allows her Mane to continuously grow, giving her endless tentacles.

As for the Nightmare one, basically RD and Twi are the only ones that enter the forest. But when they get to the ravine they're intercepted by the Shadowbolts (Six instead of three) who drop a Twi into a nest of Plundervines. RD is forced to watch Twi get ravished and filled up while they have their way with her, turning into smoggy entities that enter her body and expand her from the inside.

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Nothing does it quite for me like role playing ponies. I don't know why, but I just have a hard time digging straight on rape fics. Also, I thought you did a great job on showing it was roleplay. The moment Twilight said 'yellow,' I knew exactly what was up!
Everything about this is top notch, as usual.

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Thanks!

Twi saying "yellow" was the part I added after my other readers were confused. Glad to hear that's clearer now.

And definitely agree with you re: roleplaying. I can clop to actual rape fics, but I wind up hating myself afterwards. Also, a really involved roleplaying session implies a level of familiarity and trust between the participants that's pretty sexy by itself.

Twilight held Rainbow’s tail in her telekinesis, cranking it up and down like a pump handle—and with every pump, water poured out Rainbow’s mouth, into the fountain.

The fact that you faithfully adhered to cartoon physics delights me waaaaay more than it should. :rainbowlaugh:

7971542 Cartoon physics are best physics! :pinkiehappy:

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Mainly the rape-roleplay stuff, not my cup of tea.

This was hard to read ;-;

7972568 Fair enough.

7973307 Sorry about that.

wyd

Never stop.

He possesses a non-Euclidean number of tentacles

It's not clear what this is supposed to mean. Numbers aren't Euclidean, geometries are. I understand what you were going for, I'm just saying that this statement is gibberish.

... It probably doesn't matter that much.

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Never!

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You're absolutely right on all counts. I wanted to work in "non-Euclidean" as a Lovecraft-esque buzzword; I realized this particular usage didn't make any sense, but felt it didn't really matter.

But if it upset you, it probably does matter. When I'm done with work today, I'll go replace it with something that does make sense.

This story happened exactly like I hoped it would. Favorite bits for me were when Twilight started using Dash as a comfy seat and teasing her that she was just a balloon.

7982551 Glad you liked it! I had a lot of fun writing those specific bits.

I think a benevolent psychic/empathic being that understands verbal AND mental commands/desires is about the ONLY case where "implied" consent is 100% cool :twilightsmile:

Other than the full-body inflation (suspension of disbelief is already pretty stretched) I really liked it! And if anything, you made hooves, wings, etc inflating too pretty hot anyway!

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Huh. Belly inflation / whole body inflation to wildly unrealistic levels is my #1 fetish and my main reason for writing these stories. Heck, I started writing clop in the first place because I was disappointed with the number of stories about inflation to huge sizes on Fimfic. Kinda surprising that someone not into it would still enjoy one of my stories.

And yeah, if I had changed any details about the setup, then the implied consent would have fallen apart into something ugly.

What strains disbelief for me is that they're willing to have sex with a tentacle creature they just met, because a book they just found says it's a-okay.

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Oh I'm a huge fan of hyper belly inflation, it was the fact that it was somehow filling up her various appendages that made me go "wat!"

I was actually very intrigued (read: turned on) by your "meet in the middle" take on all-the-way-through.

7988390 Ah, that makes sense.

I blame Who Framed Roger Rabbit for my prurient interest in swollen limbs. I know it's something that can only happen with cartoon anatomy—but in my mind, that's only slightly more impossible than hyper belly inflation already is. (I do, on the other hand, have some idiosyncratic criteria for when to just inflate the belly and when to go full-body.)

As for that last bit, I think I was inspired by one line from "A Filling Time", when Rainbow Dash gets spitroasted:

She could almost swear their dicks would meet inside her, as long as they were.

I love the fact that RD was filling with flesh as well as liquids. Please never stop writing! Also do you take commisions?

8010873 Glad you enjoyed. And yes I do!

Hrm, stared out hot, but lost me about half way. Read to the end out of curiosity mainly, but not really my thing. What I get for not reading the trigger warnings first, I really ought to know better by now. :derpytongue2:

Writing was pretty good besides, though.

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Fair enough. And this is why fetish tags are so important.

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Well as rape-roleplay goes this is practically not rape ^^;;;

plundervine inflation pls pls pls pls pls pleeeaaaasssseeee





also great work!!!!

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I’ll think about it. I do like those plundervines.

Glad you enjoyed this one.

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