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Brilliant man, just brilliant!
Props man, i know how hard it is to write and argument and not come across as favoring one side over the other.
Well done.
another great chapter
Making semen non addictive. roll for Varience. On a Natural 20 it becomes 100% virile. Reroll the Natural 20 and Add. Also roll on the Percentile table for which species the offspring will be.
As for Mega Derpy chasing Mega Spike all accross Equestria, theres a Doctor for that.
RUN.
Finally! It was time Pascal grew some metaphorical balls and called out Twilight of her bullshit. I like how both of them recognized the shortcomings in their relationship.
8157953 you said it better than i could have! indeed! i think they got everything off our chests also.
Pat pat!
Especially since that sort of thing wouldn't be out of place in this world.
Derpy wants to be a giantess? That would be nice. Pascal could go swimming in her boobs, and then later put his 5 ft dick to use.
Derpy likes boobgasams? Huh. I thought she liked giving them as a gesture of affection, but getting them? Wow. She must be ultra sensitive there. On second thought, I really shouldn't be surprised by that, especially since it was probably stated in the previous story and I just forgot.
Love how Pascal doesn't capitulate. The whole thing was a very human moment where both were simultaneously certain and uncertain in their rightness.
....this was brilliant. Well done.:D
8157878 It's a testament to the characters he's created. Once you start thinking of them in terms of different personalities with experiences and fears instead of puppets to act out your plot, stuff like this happens.
Come for the porn, stay for the story.
Seriously, your ability to write introspective character development and believable emotions is the best I have ever seen on this site. Every aspect of your writing is borderline genius. Hell, you could probably write a best selling psychological thriller if you really wanted to.
The smut's not bad either.
I literally read half of Pascal's lines out loud, that was so goddamned cathartic. THANK YOU SO MUCH.
Honestly, you're amazing. The skill with which you transformed a simple smutty idea into this rolling psychological, philosophical quandary that offers complex commentary on free will, oversexualization and fetishes without coming across as preachy or self-righteous is utterly brilliant. I genuinely don't know any other author who could pull this shit off. Literally, none of them, none of those big names that pop into the feature box every time they update, none of the guys with billions of followers and an overflowing Patreon.
You're the single most unexpectedly amazing author on this entire fanfiction website.
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Which is especially impressive as readers have been calling for Twilight's blood for several chapters now. Which in itself isn't surprising, since the protagonist almost always gets a bigger pass on things than other characters.
Amazing as always. Keep up the good work!
Touching chapter. Nice to see Twilight and Pascal clearing the air. Hopefully now they can have an actual friendship/relationship. Not really sure just how close they'll end up.
I love this for only one reason. It's porn with a plot. Good porn with a good plot. You, have done the impossible.
This is the only chapter I read nowadays because it's one of the times I know of where someone is justified in calling out Twilight.
Hold up. Perhaps I'm just reading too much into this, but... Was Twi afraid that, if left alone, Pascal would have eventually tried to take his own life?
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Probably
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Well, certainly on the list. I mean, she says "not like that", but you never know exactly what she meant.
Also, at the time he was still suspect of being a very horrible and terrible monster (in vague and unspecific terms), so I suppose it factored into it as well. In fact, without having a clear picture of why he might be dangerous (even if he himself didn't know it), time played a huge part in the whole thing.
Like she said, he was a risk. A major risk - mainly because nobody knew what kind of risk he represented. In a sense, everyone was running around like headless chickens in panic, sort of, because they were strongly motivated to prepare their defenses, but nobody knew against what, exactly.
So yeah, the mob thing? The fact that he kept staring at them wasn't even that big in itself, and the townsfolk would've probably gotten over it given enough time... and I also think he would've eventually gotten over it, generally (exposure works - most people on nudist beaches don't run around with painful erections, do they?). Besides, this is Ponyville - they would've eventually accepted him, warts and all. "Staring" would've been a bit of his "unique charm", after a while - especially after they got to know him and figured they were more of a problem for him than he ever was for them. ;] Fluttershy is a perfect example right there - he provided a new variable, one she could use to be better herself. Ponyville didn't need to kick him out, and he could've possibly even been beneficial in the long run.
But no. The entire thing was, from day one, fueled by Celestia's paranoia. They were told he was dangerous. They were told to deal with him quickly. There was mounting pressure. The citizens of Ponyville had no idea what to expect, and they were constantly on edge about it. Even Pinkie was barred from throwing him a party - something that I assume wasn't overlooked by everyone... So the residents were constantly under stress, day and night... and his staring (which, you know, was probably his subconscious escape from the same issue) didn't help.
This situation was going to explode - the entire town was sitting on a powder keg. What set it off wasn't important, in the grand scheme of things. He could've just as well tried to steal a muffin. Hell, for all they knew this was completely natural for the guy. But no, shit went to hell because the town basically needed a reason to drive him out.
And yeah, Twilight Sparkle failed, and rather spectacularly at that. She's the Paragon of Friendship, the openness personified. Yes, she's still just a pony, but with all of the lessons she learned, if there was anypony that should've recognized all this - it was her (especially after having gone through a very similar thing with Zecora).
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I normally try not to respond to comments over a year old, but there’s something I want to say.
Regarding the Zecora issue, I’m not sure that comparison is as accurate as it might seem at first. Twilight recognized her as a zeba, and knew what zebras were. She knew Zecora wasn’t teh dangerous, stereotypical ″swamp witch″ Ponyville tried to paint her as. At least until then poison joke thing planted some doubt in her mind.
Pascal, on the other hand, was a complete unknown, especially at first. All she had to go on initially were some vague rumors and whatever personal observations she’d made. Plus, she had orders from the immortal, infallible, God-Queen of Equestria, herself, inflaming her paranoia. And even if she did start trying to actively work around Celestia’s words, they would still have some subconscious effect on her. Especially considering how highly Twilight values everything Celestia says/does.
So I don’t know for sure, but it kind of feels to me like the similarities between the Zecora and Pascal situations might be more superficial than they first seem.
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I couldn’t have put it better myself. I started this story expecting smut, maybe some interesting exploration of his ability, and here i am, reading through the sequel, excited to read more conversations, more debates, more character interactions, etc. I never expected to enjoy this story the way i do, but i’m damn happy to be here.
This reminded me of the awkward reconciliation hug from the Pine brothers, the only thing missing was the "pad pad" at the end of these